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♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★This Saiyan ...*cough*... this Lord wanted to claim first but was late, so imma gonna read first before "reviewing" again. ♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★
Translation Quality: Is okay for the most part, but there are a few lines that do feel out of place. However, with the context of it being a trial read then it’s pretty good. Stability of Updates: I’m sure you guys know the drill by now. Story Development: I’d say don’t judge this story based on the description, because it’s not very accurate. What is true: yes, he was a Godking* and he did die and reincarnate.What’s not true: that he can’t cultivate and chose to nurture disciples instead. As far as his nine disciples are concerned; they seem to have been his disciples while he was a Godking.That said I do find the premise of this story and cultivation system to be plenty interesting. I do like the fact that the sect he reincarnated into isn’t some random weakest sect, in the weakest location, but one he had established thousands of years ago before ascending. As a result sect development is one of core plots of this novel, which is a sub genre I’m personally a big fan off. Of course it’s not devoid of the typical cliches of this genre, but again I’d say the premise of this novel and it’s cultivation system is enough to give a try regardless. Edit:*the term in the actual translation seems to differ; I’m not sure if his actual rank was an Immortal King or not, but I left it as Godking for similicity’s sake.Also I’ve rated it 5 stars because:A. It’s not been westernized.B. To counterbalance reviews made by some very biased people who haven’t even actually read the novel.
Truly a wonderful novel, pls support!!!!! Read the first couple of chapters the summary might seem not that good but The novel is worth it!
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great premisse but the mc its too stupid omg he can't do nothing right its cringe ... i hate this mc soo much i hope he dies <3 love the world and premissse but the mc its just too retard for me
Ok. Grammar and general writing skills not great. Dialogue and characters need a lot of work. Good start for author, defenatly lots of potential, this just isn’t there yet. Characters are empty without any traits or quirks.
It is a pretty nice novel compared to most of the novels on this sit and. would love to see it be picked. ?. .
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Beginning looked quite promising. Then there was that forced cliche and everything became a mess with the sudden changes, broken plot armors, ridiculous power levels. The pacing went all over the place. That said, I have not read further past chapter 40, but what I got there gives me mixed feelings.