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Ch.26, Apparently this is a dropped novel being translated after the thought. At this moment, the writing is good, but EXTREMELY slow. This could pass as a soap opera with the amount of useless fluff, and I don’t think anyone reading this expected it. Think your getting into an actually seriously written action webnovel? Think again, it will never happen, mark my words. Go find an already written one and suck it up that you started it after it was finished and you will find none of the enjoyment that characterizes following webnovels. Fml. -signing off, over exaggerating reviewer #0405
Ok I spent the first half of this book cursing it because it was almost painful to read. I kept reading because I actually like the MC even if he is such a doormat in the first half. The story going on in the background with his origins is why I kept reading because it was interesting and other than the fact that his family is a total nightmare, and he won't stand up to them for most of the first half...it still had good points with the rest of what was happening around him. The second half of the book was much better because he finally stopped letting himself get pushed around. It was a process for real. BUT now it stopped at 200 chapters just as I was getting really into it and it hasn't been updated in forever. PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH THE STORY!!
My standards aren't high but this is a really trash novel ....................................................................................
the plot of this story is changing faster then my parent's love for me.sndndkkdmdmfmfmdkdkdkdmfjdndndndmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdldldldld
Good ff, keep it up ??
I like the story that’s all I have to say but since it has to be 140 charters long I’ll say the part I liked the most was the comedy I am easy to humor though and this is my first review I think.
sooo...I am here to talk about MC's childhood friend Hanna...I think there is a misunderstanding about her relationship with Tatsuya...first of all her relationship with MC is not a love relationship but a friendship so her having a boyfriend other than the MC is not a betrayal to him and all his thoughts about her are his delusion so BLAMING her on a misunderstanding is wrong, to begin with...of course, we can't ignore what that bastard Tatsuya did with Raiden to kill the MC...so what I want to say is that because she has a relationship with a bastard don't make her a bad girl or anything even if she had ⓢⓔⓧ with him because she is still worried about MC even when he ignored her so she is not two-faced or anything like that but just a childhood friend that had a boyfriend other than the MC.so want her to have a bad ending is just so much. as for Rei...well, I don't understand what is wrong with her having a boyfriend?.finally his sister ... you know Mr. author when I read this part as the end of chapter 32. I wanted to say WTF if he had such intelligence little sister then why did he suffer so much. from her introduction, she seems to be an influential person, and if she is the one who makes him go to this school then how did she was oblivious to his wellbeing inside the school.Also, some readers expected that Raiden will Rape her or make her his girlfriend.but I expect something more meaningful from you Mr. author And I wish that you would not do anything stupid like that... also, please make sure that the MC had enough time and encounters to mature in some meaningful way instead of his current almost-crazy state.. so, please don't make him come back with this immature mentality. I think all readers like the Intelligence and serene MC. because no one will read hundreds of chapters about immature individual and his journey to revenge against some kids and instead of making clean revenge he will just go on unending revenge with their families or something like that. so again. if you planning to take your time in making him mature then it's okay just don't let him come back before maturing enough. also don't make him do silly mistakes like coming bake to school to flaunt his strength or to make everyone regrets what they did with him, ...etc.just let him make a secret organisation or something like that, and make sure to let him indifferent enough to the life and death of the people. because he should have lost his humanity in the day they betrayed him.also, I don't know what plans you have for Hanna but just make it quick and bearable maybe something like enslaves her or disfiguring her with X-mark on her face in a moment of rage. or maybe he will just ignore her and make her suffer emotionally... anyway I still don't understand how she is wrong but whatever you want to do then do it.finally, make sure to satisfy us when he takes care of all his classmates in a very beautiful and satisfying way.(I really don't know why I wrote so much for 32 chapters...)and thanks for writing such a good novel, please don't stop. work hard Mr. Author.
love the start, love the plot keep it up, missy
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Please please update
Good story, the main characters sometimes make me feel annoyed.