CheekyForehead
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Good luck author! Nice work!For everyone else, this is a time wasting review swap. Still,any book written is a book with reading. Go ahead and give it a try!
Writing Quality: 5/5Story Development: 5/5Character Design: 4/5Updating Stability: 5/5World Background: 4/5Go ahead and check it out.. Good quality read. Never stretches out the actions and bores you.
This novel takes inspiration from tensura, not much and it is it's own interesting world, it has only two times when it takes something from tensura, that's the skill ranking (maybe) and the fact he starts with a skill that takes skills and other things, but that's all. It's so good, if you like tensura read this NOW, it's funny the story is good. I hope the author continues to write this.
I am just Shitposting but Cthulu allspark was here............................................................................................................................
early chaps were good, got worse when he started helping the humans for no reason, author gave constant debuffs and some random demon copied the system. RANDOM DEMON COPIED THE SYSTEM
Y'know, as a woman I love a good story. As myself I love video games. This books really compliments and balances both aspects! I've enjoyed understanding the characters and reading the plot. I look forward to reading more~
Jack has visited a couple other novels in the past and I think that this new home of his will suit him well, I’m excited to see this new adventure of his and his companions! カンバてください!
I like all the characters of this story but updating problem is too frustrating. Pls update more chapters frequently. And mc is too comedian his antics for more profit are too funny.
The story seems like it was written by a teenager.The direction, flow everything is cliche and cringe as fk.So many predictable things in this story that I feel like the author is inexperienced in plot making.
Excellent mc, system and lore. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Didn't read it yet but I will keep it in my list for future reading...................................................................................
