sometimes, I wonder what goes through their minds during rejection
it gets better as you read.
wow ..., really nice blurb you got there. will definitely read this ...
Well written! Waiting for update
Are you going to continue this story?
This story is incredibly difficult to read due to lack of even basic grammar, story structure, and flow. I hope the author is not to offended but this story reads as through is was crammed through a translator or constructed by some one with a rudimentary grasp of English.
hey wt about today's update.....we are waiting.....
nice job, keep going please
Happy i stacked this from ch 150
I just read some absolute b*ll*cks. the author didnt give two sh*ts about making this a bit realistic (tho transmigration and parallel world are unrealistic)
I'm genuinely intrigued by the concept here, as there are intriguing ideas present. However, the author's writing style feels very distinctively Chinese, which is something I struggle with. I can accept fantastical elements like spiritual powers and the cultivation-centric worldview, but the way these ideas are presented feels overly simplified and derivative of Chinese literary traditions, in a way that doesn't appeal to me.
Additionally, the author lacks depth in understanding human psychology and塑造 complex characters. A zombie apocalypse narrative often serves as a platform for exploring the human condition, but referring to frightened individuals as "leeches" early on, even if from the protagonist's perspective, doesn't ring true. It misses the opportunity to delve into the psychological aspects of such a scenario.
In my opinion, the story would greatly benefit from a different setting or premise, without zombies or an apocalyptic backdrop. The acknowledgment that the zombie virus itself is more terrifying due to its contagious nature is commendable, but the protagonist's choice of a dagger as their weapon, knowing even a small amount of blood exposure could be fatal, seems ill-advised.
Overall, while I appreciate the initial concept, the execution falls short for me due to the writing style and character development.
For now I'm on chapter 150, I have to say it's quite soft. Qin Xin hasn't done anything yet to be like the villains in some wuxia, I'll almost feel sorry for her, but hey the seed of hatred is planted, I don't know if it's going to change soon