anonymous226
A little goofy
Very unfortunate no continued translation. This novel is very good (in comedic sense). Pretty funny mc
"OMG! I absolutely adore this! ?? It's fantastic! Don't judge, I'm just head over heels in love with it! It gives me the same warm vibes as the book 'Untouchable Lady.' Trust me, you should definitely read it! ???"
If you're looking for something to read but find the author's other works unremarkable, this particular book might be a decent choice despite its mediocrity. The story has an intriguing premise, similar to Mulan but with variations, which keeps the reader engaged. However, the author frequently employs elements that prevent the narrative from standing out:
1. Inconsistencies in character abilities: The main character (MC) possesses supernatural memory skills, which are implausible at times. For instance, the MC can recall speeches even while distracted, and later, a blind character can guess dice outcomes based on sound, which defies credibility, especially in a casino setting.
2. Lack of logic: As a general, the MC should be aware of the potential for misinterpretation due to her unique abilities. Yet, she remains oblivious to suspicion from the love interest (ML), failing to anticipate plot twists like her brother's betrayal.
3. Character development: The author focuses too much on abilities that aren't essential to the plot, leading to character inconsistencies that can be frustrating.
4. Villain portrayal: The author's villains often lack depth and complexity, appearing as generic archetypes with minor variations rather than fully realized characters.
5. Misogyny: There's a noticeable level of misogyny in the author's works, particularly in her treatment of female villains, who are portrayed as one-dimensional and cruel without remorse.
Overall, while the story might be worth reading, the author's writing choices detract from the overall impact of the novel. It's important to note that personal preferences may vary, and these criticisms could change depending on individual tastes.
This was enjoyable. The translation was satisfactory, and I completed the rest through my own understanding. As others have mentioned, the author cleverly pokes fun at common Chinese tropes, initially making the story appear ordinary. However, the humor lies in the subtle references, particularly to the excessive focus on cleanliness and chastity often seen in Chinese novels. There are instances where characters discuss intimate matters, like:
"How far did you go with He Ran? You've only held hands a few times over the years, really? Hmm... Oh, I see." (Followed by a more explicit scene)
Later, they ask He Ran, "You've had numerous partners, yet nothing happened. Even with Gou An, it's just hand-holding. Honestly, is there something amiss with you?"
The highlight was when HJX used LW as a metaphor for a fire extinguisher, which brought laughter. The pacing is well-balanced, with a reasonable amount of plot twists. It's refreshing that not everyone has a happy ending; while I empathize with them, it leaves me feeling slightly melancholic due to their unfortunate situations. They evoke a sense of pity.
I can't read this sh*t anymore please someone spoil me the ending ? What happened to Mc and his original b*tch teammates
TRASH. Do not read. Disgusting novel. Who wrote this? The ML is a perverted maniac. I do not see redeeming quality in him. He likes touching the FL against her wishes. He even whipped her till she bled. I was seriously anticipating a better ML than this. This novel is a perfect picture of a worthless, egotistical, pervert and cruel maniac of a ML.
Is the MC strong in this novel? If yes, then how strong is he?
i am torn between not reading vs reading this novel due to the "Dense MC" tag and the "Polygamy" tag respectively. does the MC get laid? does he not? what nightlife scenarios can i expect? come on these two tags are never a good mix, it sends so many mixed messages.
Very good
I mean we all have that one friend that can't handle their alcohol??
Only problem is spelling errors here and there but overall good
Since some people might get confused, Pursuit of the truth is another name for Beseech the devil
I love the love story. It so captivating
