I was just got hooked because of the trial read, then I found out this one is really different.something to my taste; a little bit different compared to the typical system-based novels; a new approach and of course thought raising story.I liked it so far (20chapters). hope it gets picked up later on.
Gud Gud gud_This novel has a system that has many more systems._MC is fuckingOP_Harem_modern another world.1+1=10 ?
WTH is this?
Usual apocalyptic stories are really hard to explain, but you explain it very well??._my favorite line is "Nike is using his jaywalking skills to the maxium" hilariously funny._characters well presented?_the 2 chapter at the beginning have me naruto vibes??As for suggestions there's none really but keep your story understandable when it comes to action parts.
First let me tell you something. This novel is not bad but the author is full of sh*t. It is ok as far as the genre of op protagonists goes. You will see face smacking and you will see an overbearing protagonist. The reason why I gave this novel a bad rating is because of a certain paragraph in the 59th chapter. Idk why it ticked me of so much since I'm quite used to bullsh*t chinise nation*lism, but this one was so over my fking tolerance bar.The current antagonist in that chapter says something and then says how popular it is in western countries. He literally could have said that it is popular with some minority of sick people. But nooooo its popular in the horrid West. Fck off!!!
Poorly executed plot. Translator leaves much of the chinese language as is without providing explanations to the inside jokes or references that the author makes. This is nothing shot of pure laziness. There's a few specific chapters that involve a cell phone and some texting app, the only problem is that as the reader we have absolutely no clue what's going on. No translator notes, no editor notes, nothing. 5 Chapters of the 34 that I read are completely incomprehensible in relation to the plot because this translator is lazy.Besides that, I did mention that the plot was poorly executed. What I mean by that is that there's little to no segway into the actions the main character makes. Often times the author skips over explanations of situations or such explanations aren't translated well enough for the reader to understand what's happening. This ties into the translator being lazy.Concept wise, it's very interesting. I've read about similar concepts in other novels, but it's original enough to still feel fresh considering the overall bland nature of this genre. This is of course hampered by the lack of explanations from the author or the poorly translated explanations from the lazy translator.Much of the novel is lost in translation. Much of the novel is marketed towards people in China/Korea, it's not really meant for English audiences, I wouldn't be surprised if such people would have difficulty in relating to situations described in the novel.The author is very bad at writing fighting scenes. A lot of the background in such scenes is bland and lackluster with lack of detail. The combat is also poorly described.Overall, a lot is lacking with this novel.
When i first saw the Cover and Name i thought this would be like every other System Novel around here but apon a recommendation from a freind and reading the Summery i must say this novel keeps blowing me away! The comedy is spot on and dosnet pull any punches which i adore. Every new chapter seems to draw me deeper into the world and made me genuinely care about the Protagonist of this story and relate to the obstacles he must go through to move on. The Foreshadowing and the Suspense building makes me eagerly wait every new Chaper release to get my fix and with the speed in which the chapers are releasing i must say their is never a dull moment in my reading sessions as i eagerly await a chaper update notification while at home or at work. This has some Amazing potential and i cant wait to be here as it rises the ranks to the top! So as a summery, Amazing Pacing aswell as comedy and character development, sprinkle in the Occasion NSFW scenes and suspense and you have what i consider one of if not the best up and coming Novel ive read! I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a good novel to sink their litterary teeth into you wont regret it!P.s Sorry for how long this reveiw this is my first one and this novel is so good i could resist writing one down! you could say this novel took my first~
Awesome! Keep it up bro! That was a nice plot you have there! Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Ichijoku makes the right decision though ☹️. Sorry for the guy?
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I am really angry now. Only 4.0 rating... this novel is amazing which idiots spreading bullsht without reading. Great novel recomended. 1111q11qq111q111
250 chapters inHave to say the novel is unique for the a cultivation novel and that the author has put a good amount of thought into the plot for the story. The first 50 chapters are good but at the same time rough they serve a important part to the story but reading the perspective of a mc thats just getting abused the whole time did for me get a bit annoying and felt like it was going on for to long. after that for around 100 chapters story was pretty good and can say I enjoyed what I read, But as I started closer to around the 200 chapter mark I started disliking things with the plot more and more having to do with the mc. Mc cultivation progress is moving at a snails pace, he keeps getting stronger with being able to cross more realms to fight others but his actual cultivation grade hardly changes. He starts training in multiple area's before really ever mastering what he was already working on specially when he decideds to train in very unconventional paths like duel weilding spears, halberts and glaives. Took the mc hundreds of years to fully accept his relationship with his first wife. He acts coldly to someone that tells him they have been waiting for him for hundreds of millions of years and that you are there life partner. But yet he sits in the wrong seat in hall and suddenly decides he needs to take responsibility for a girl just a chapter earlier he was deciding on to take revenge on there clan or not like tf? Also author if you see this you should add a introduction chapter or in the summary of the novel explaining cultivation ranks I still don't know them. Saw comments about you saying just go to a wiki of rise rising and risen to see the stages in order but I couldn't find anything going over cultivation ranks,there was hardly any information posted on the wiki.
Loved this book! Great job author!