Great book so far, the prologue was a bit dark but it fitted really wel in the story and it explained a lot about the actions of the protagonist. Some part of the story took a bit of inspration of other books but you did it in a way that it fits in your story and not just copy pasted it and that was well done. I look forward to the direction that will take this book in.
The only sad part is dat I couldn’t read it completely in the 24 hours that is was free.
Author kun plz do a mess release this novel is sooo good!!!
Impossible to readLook into getting an editor or using grammarlyIdk why thats so hard for most people on this site. i wont read this again until it has better grammar
I was looking through new books and accidentally landed on this one. Wow, this was awesome. Author please don't drop this okay? this is going to be a hit one day.
can anyone tell me the raws i can't find it anywhere.i really awould appreciate it if u could recommend similar novels as well..............
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Hello! I am the author of this novel!What I want to write is about silly, but honest guy who likes to eat bananas and dreams of becoming Monkey God to shut up all those who called him stupid like monkey.Monkeys are cool, right? They can be also tough and that's Michu's goal. He will also change his poor life and help his family get rid of the poverty!Any questions can be asked in this review! I will answer them all!This is harem + system novel as part of wpc. MC will turn out to be pretty strong in the game and he will gather attention of many people including potential love interests. But every woman appearing in the series won't be his woman because our monkey god would need to share his banana too much.XD
The world building and attention to detail in this novel is amazing! Seriously, reading was intriguing and like a mini adrenaline rush at times! Especially in the first chapter. It's been a long time since I've been so invested in a book so early!What I truly appreciated was that the world detail didn't stop after that point though. The author continued to create both suspense and a vivid picture as we continued.The spelling and grammar were also great, which obviously goes a long way in holding the flow of the story.
Honestly, the author is way too fast paced with this story, they could have started slow, progressed the character and world development and then prepared Jarvis for the fight against the demon lord or whatever. It takes just a couple of chapters for Jarvis to win the fight and it takes even less time for him to develop better technology. Also, the system, it would have been better if he got knowledge rewards instead of straight up real people, it makes the story and effort shallow and the people feel soul-less. The characters as well feel a little shallow and empty, let them develop with more screen time or whatever is the equivalent.Overall, a great story concept and execution for a first try attempt, I assume. Just slow down to story and let it breath and settle a little.
MC is very naive be you can see the development and the progress he makes to improve only himself but to help those close to him although I personally would like a bit more chapters with his relationships with his loved one (female and male friends )
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.