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This book is really captivating. Just the first chapter alone got me hooked and then when I went through the story itself it finally got me addicted. O My wow, I never thought this story would be mind blowing. Good work author.
Overall i rate it 4.5 its kinda good in my opinion and i also recommend reading it but its only my opinion there are some who disagrees.....
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This story had a great start. The system was a little off, but could be corrected and improved over time. It did not get improved and only went downhill from there. The system seems to forget simple things. For example, it missed when the MC killed a three legged chicken and it did not update the Exp on it. It just randomly says, “you killed enough things to here’s a level or two”. The character has many loopholes and for a character that is supposed to get smarter every level, he seems to forget simple things. One time he decides to kill two mages because, “although they are non hostile they provide a passive threat to me that could go off anytime”. The problem is that the MC forgot he has this power that can make people forget things and make them have illusions. He could have just made them forget any trace of him then put them under an illusion so they can’t see him or his traces. Also the grammar is quite bad. I must say though that this story had great potential. The way the character thought was in a unique way, a way I really liked (at first). The power he had was also unique. A great book that had huge potential, that gave me more thoughts and an unique way of thinking. Poor execution though in my opinion.
Interesting concept and premise. Author did a good job on the lore. Though there are few chapters, this just seems the start to wonderful adventures of Augustine and his reaper wife, Azrael.The character designing is done well by the author. We have a sassy reaper wife, a funny mc, an old wholesome couple and let's not talk about Natalus, he's probably busy trying to save his cat from Azrael. xDThe world building is simple and precise, just like how I prefer. Goodjob on that. Though very few things are known, I am looking forward to Augustine's adventure to Elysium, netherworld and the mortal world.Update stability is good, the development of the story is neither too fast nor too slow and the writing quality is good. Well done. (:I wish you well for this book, author, and I am really looking forward to future chapters ╰( ･ ᗜ ･ )➝
for now I'm giving everything besides writing quality 5 stars since it's hard to judge those things at this time, but from what I've seen it looks great. the only issue is some minor mistakes when it comes to grammar but nothing that takes one out of the flow
This is a really great novel. I like this concept much more than teaching system ones, this novel is for building an academy as a whole, not only just for being a teacher. The concepts on which he powers up is also very nice and allows him to be knowledgeable instead of other novels where they don't know the underlying concepts.
This is the same novel as the previous trial novel that didn't even selected!downvote for this novel!gg webnovel!#notgonnasupoortthisnovel
great book after you get past the first 5 chaps it is a really good book.,.,.(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)