Every chapter leaves me anticipating for more. how I which I can just binge read it ?
A story with substance. An author taking chances.
- love Freya and Leng San, who knows, maybe they would eventually end up together!- Nice character designs! it's quite slow in the progress but i enjoy reading it anyway !!!
La premisa es buena, pero la escritura es como un mtl, terrible, no se si es traduccion o es original, pero igual la escritura deja mucho que desear, si puedes soportar eso, la historia no esta mal. Lei hasta el cpaitulo 23, de momento no se sabe mucho del fondo mundial y ni si quiera se como se ve el mc, pero queda por ver mas adelante
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One of the reasons i like this book. The author have bo qualms in killing mc close one and his friends closed ones. Killing them and show development in character. Unlike other book where mc always save someone at the last second.
Hello Everyone! This is the author of this new novel. This has been a work that I have always wanted to write, but never dared to due to several reasons.1. I have pretty bad grammar and vocabulary (Sorry :P)2. I am a high school student and I do not have that much time to write new chapters everyday (However I do try my best!)3. I never really found a suitable platform to show my work on, but I finally found it on Webnovel :)I hope you guys like the novel as it was actually inspired from all my biology studying and the martial arts novels that I LOVEE to read. If you guys have any comments be sure to drop it below and I will try my best to adjust to it!
The story is interesting. Even in today's world, many of us have to follow in our parents' footsteps for some reason... although different individuals may have different motivations. Anyway, you chose quite a difficult topic to write about.There are some issues with grammar, punctuation, etc., but all of us, here, learn, improve our skills and talent, so don't worry, just work hard.The only thing which is kind of annoying - jumping from one POV to another. You can do all that just writing in 3rd POV.
I quIte literally have no idea what is hallenijg with the character or the story. The author seems fixated on makijg the characTer some sorT of edgelord god with his personality and Making gIrls around him fAll in love With him for such little reaSons
I love how the story goes. The development at first is a bit shaky. At first I thought the MC is too OP but as the story progressed it shows stability and balance. It is also my second favorite next to chrysalis(of course because it is FREE and not to mention the story is good as well). I would love to see it not in premium in the future or if it will I wish the quality stays the same or even became better.
Anytime I read this I always imagine myself as the main character. It's really lit. Keep it up bro????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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