First , I am putting my all my efforts into writing the novel , editing it , then translating it and editing it again . Therefore , I hope for your encouragement and interaction no matter how simple it may seem to you , it means a lot to me.The novel will be amazing and uniqueThe story is better then a lot of famous novel's stories and i am doing my best to make it logical and develop in correct wayI think i create a new type of novels when the MC reincarnate but 5 years before the appearance of my RPG gameMy novel will contain 3 parts every new one will be much bigger than the old oneThe firs part is the story in the real EarthThe second is in the game when we will have a world between fantazy and cultivation The third is when the humans travel to the new world or the game's worldWe will have more parts but it will came latterI will make a work similar to my favourite works with more than 3000 chapitres and i need your support and helpIf you are interested in being a caracter in my novel ore have any ideas feel free to contact me ire write it in the comments
I love the story so far. I love the concept of it and how it dives into a system, yet it gives me the feel of not everything being OP> The vibes remind of the book, Blood Warlock Succubus (whatever the title was) in terms of concept, and I really loved that book. The writing quality is also really good, and it's an easy and smooth read. Definitely something I recommend to people who like the post apocalyptic style of writing. Great work!
so far so goodI like what I am reading it's paced nicely not too slow not too fastfeels like a breath of fresh air in all the repetitive webnovels
Nice , i will add this to my collection. I will continue reading it too."Mythical Holiday Gift , Be Mine Now" the mc is likeable to be honest hehe
This is more of a question than a review (currently in CH10) why would you return the limiting human aspects when the story was just getting good? In no novel ever has emotions ever led to good plot. Decisions become reckless for lack of a better word. Why not just proceed with the plant based evolution? How did Sumi jump from wanting to enjoy her time to looking for more work(burdens) It's quite frustrating finding a good read then you take us(me) back to the common tropes
bruh it's a full blown ntr novel I thought it was netori last half hour was so bad for me tch .never gonna believe sypnosis
I am reading this novel from the begining. Now i think i should write a review for it. This story is good but authors need to make his writing quality more better.. There are sometimes somethings happens so suddenly.But i think if the writer fix this problems this story have so high potential . You should give a try to it.
give your feedback review ? . it will help to improve writing skills . please ignore grammatical mistakes .
This is one of the best novels I've read. The beginning was beautiful, and it felt like I was reading poetry. I love the accents of the characters. The descriptions are well-made and offer insight to the events as if I were a spectator. Amazing!
Is this harem?
Hello, I have read this book up to chapter 15 and in my opinion, it is one of the most innovative books on the theme of sons of happiness and villains stealing that happiness that I have read. Really the author delights me with his unique perspective on this genre, reading this book I felt a breath of fresh air in the musty room of this genre of books. The plot engages with a theme of revenge and character development, on top of that you don't have to wait hundreds of chapters for Mc to change for the better. The author also brilliantly captured the theme of Mc's physical development, he doesn't spend some points to become a Greek god overnight, from his old obese self, but actually buckles down to achieve his dream figure. The fact he has help from a unique side character to achieve this, but it doesn't happen in one day only it may take him two weeks to a month to be in good shape. Beyond that, Mc becomes more and more clever and confident as the storyline progresses, which is very enjoyable. We also clearly see the traits of the other characters, making them not seem one-dimensional. The romance is also well-written, but it's not the sweet one from books about the heroic Mc, but the one from books about villains, i.e. more manipulative and toxic, and bordering on taboo. The skills possessed by Mc are interesting, but Mc is not unique because others also possess powerful deceptions and Mc will actually have to make an effort in fighting them and strain his head. In addition, the author updates if I remember correctly daily which is a huge plus. I also haven't noticed any major problems with writing style or grammar, typos, repetitions, etc. I sincerely recommend it to all lovers of this genre and beyond.
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