Overall really great story! Love the innocence of the characters and it sticks with throughout the story
Ok here’s my review: Prologue is amazing! So so cool! And then the vibe between the characters is the sweetest brotherhood vibe. I love that. I can see this being a very exciting book! I can sit and listen to this one which is great.
The novel is outstanding. The descriptions of scenes, character expressions, and their emotions are masterfully done, even if they sometimes repeat. Additionally, the game's background is captivating and adds a lot to the story
It's interesting I must say and I love the impact. I really commend the author, he did a good job here and I love it. Thanks author for sharing this wonderful knowledge with us.
Give me mooore, I want moooore ! This story is very fascinanting and the character development is breathtaking. You should read this RIGHT NOW.
I tend to not review things, cuz I never could be bothered by such a trivial thing to do when I'm immersed in a novel, But this one deserved it.I just finished Chap 22, And I just wanted to post a review before going to sleep.So this is a refresher. After all the brain rot novels, manga, manhwas and manhuas this is a change of sides of the leaf. It has a traditional style to it. And good development too. Tomorrow Ill binge read the remaining or ill wait a while for it to brew and read it all at once.I recommend it to anyone who is browsing this and is scared to read it because of its low numbers of reviews, or thinking of this as a troll novel. Its not a troll and is actually a really good read.Keep it up author, If you ever feel down thinking no one is appreciating your work. Just remember I am supporting and rooting for you and am hoping to read more of this novel. So keep your head up man you've created something good.
This is a Thrilling book, the characters are well portrayed and the writing style is very good. I recommend it to everyone.
Your writing quality has improved but not much as it was good from the start and the updates are regular from the start the story development is pretty good and looking impressive, hooking storyline. Character design is good so far as it is work in progress and last but not least the world background is still pretty much same as ours but not quite the same so I'm hoping that the world background or at least the world around the mc is explained in the coming chapters. overall its a good novel.
i think it's a different story according time travel and some different thinking i seen. well i am also a writer hopefully you also like my book. "The unleashed power"
I love the story and mc very much pls ? fast update and harem pls
Two_World here. I will keep it brief:-Fast Paced-Unique enough concept, it will be revealed in 1st chapter-Family Building-Army Building-Sweet Love I ask you to give a chance to this novel and give suggestionsIf you have any questions, ask and I will answer them.
This novel is still in its early stages, so it’s not perfect . There are areas where it feels a bit rough around the edges, and there’s room for improvement mostly pacing and romance buildup. That said, the foundation is solid, and i want to see the conquest of the heroines and the downfall of that "protag" bum.