KangGalonUWT
MC has god complex, thinking and acting as if he's the most superior and all of humanity is like his pet slaves
I mean I just a master piece so in-depth with characters and story would read again and again without hesitation. Looking forward to the next book to read can’t wait !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good book but too many mistakes at the beginning but it gets better??????????????????????????????????????
the story is perfect. it is sad to see it only has 14 chapters though, so I hope the authors would make more!!!the character is good. the world is perfect. I can not ask for any better!!
I really enjoyed reading this novel I recommend others to check it out
it became trash after 100 chapter, it became a mix of vr, cultivation, taoism even sun wukong and other chinese legends will got into the mix
The author has done a good work in trying to add mystery and I look forward to how the story turns out! Please keep writing ?............The synopsis is also really nice ✨✨✨
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A good story about world development despite the plot being over done in many novels on this site. Too bad the author took a break, but it's worthy reading.
Hey there, you who is reading this review. What are you thinking about? This novel is good. There's no need to think very much. The storyline is good and you will not disappointed when reading it.
It seemed interesting then I looked it up on mtl sources to check how long this actually went or if it was dropped by the main author... anyways this entire novel is 251 chapters long and is completed. I'd like to end this review with 251 characters
Hello, Deathilim here. I'm gonna be shameless as heck but I'm gonna put my review on five stars. Well, that aside this is my first ever written story! I've been interested in The Novel's Extra's concept and planned to make one of my own. Except, this is not plot driven for the most part but character driven.I put more emphasis on the main characters rather than the overall plot, however, there's still plot. Just don't expect it to be grander or over the top amazing!Writing Quality — I know some eenglish here and there, but not a native english speaker. Please pardon my mistakes in writing.Story Development — The start will be neither fast not slow, atleast that is what i envision. I will lay out the important things at the first few ten chapters and then you shan't worry about the pacing.Character Design — Eh, most of my characters are inspired by many different novels. But the main character is an empty vessel, his character at it's core is empty. Updating Stability — I will update atleast 1 chapter a day, if I don't, I will upload 2 chapters next day.World Background — Pretty, uh, mediocre? This is a magical world set in a modern futuristic setting. Earth, of the future has converged all of it's continent forming the “Pangea” or supercontinent. There will be other races too!Well, that's all for the most part! Thank you, please leave a comment and criticize this work of mine.
