Just caught up to the story at chapter 458, and it has yet to disappoint me.
It's difficult to find novels of this quality at WebNovel. Grammer can still .r slightly improved, but the story itself is top notch.
Keep up the good work author, and don't rush the story. The gradual character development of Noel and Anna, along with the improvement in their relationship is definitely a big part of why this novel is so good.
Man. Wt f is this?? I feel like my logic dying. Not only is MC generic CN Mc, at some point I felt like this is just a great translation of a regular CN novel.
If you like this novel, either you are reading this while keeping your brain shut or you’re just too used to CN novels by now.
I mean, the way MC se Xually harassed a girl just in the first 5 chapters and the girl, instead of feeling creeped out and hitting MC back, she blushed. YES she f ing BLUSHES from Se Xual HARRASMENT!! And guess what, at one point I felt like not MC manipulates the fate any make everyone brain dead, he makes himself brain dead.
This makes me soo mad. Like where’s the laws? Where’s the logic? Why is everyone brainwashed and brain dead.
????? What an intriguing story u have there author. looking forward to more adventures?????
As I have seen by now, you have a great reader support as many votes for your works. This means that many were backing you up. Keep improving and writing as you will improve later on in due time. Your story quality was there and plot was complex enough. Making also a cultivation novel speaks that you are a culitivation fan. Good luck on the Spirity! Hope to see you in December! hehe ?
A Cultivation novel written for six year olds. Posturing and wasting opportunities included. MC has a very low IQ and most decisions seem arbitrary.Why the author is so reluctant about killing while still doing it is a mystery to me. Seriously, an old and powerful Devil Cultivatior 'knocking out' an enemy and then leaving? Or did stabbing a downed enemy mean killing them. I don't know because the writer shyies away from actually writing about death and killing.My main complaint is about the way this book is written, not about the world building or characters (I have seen better, but it is webnovel, so my expectations are low). I won't be continuing, but a well done Manga might get my attention.
Just an author giving some review to his work ?The story starts from the roots of everything. The protagonist is vicious, carefree, bossy, self-centered, kind of narcissist. The ending will be explaining. I will be trying to make the story as interesting as i can.? Please look forward. *if i need something to improve please let me know. And thank you so much for reading ?
only a few chapters in and first thoughts on the story is that its confusing and weird. Constant switching between 1st and 3rd person every other sentence doesn't help either. Looking at the last upload makes the novel looked dropped so thats my main reason not going to continue. No point getting invested in a story for it to never continue.
This novel is great! My only complaint is the slow release rate! Why is it only 14 chapters! One of the best novels i have ever read. Good Job!
Wow, what an incredible story! Incredible pacing, very intricate story with interesting characters! Very well structured with great punctuation and grammar, very easy to read. Can’t wait to read the next chapter as soon as it comes out.
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