I really love this book. Your cover and blurb were captivating, the amazing lessons, I'm sure your book will teach through the blurb, is really enticing too. I can't wait to dive into this. Definitely an amazing read, you guys??. Off to read it.??
the blurb hints of mystery, romance and action. it could be more concise, though.
nice intro chapter. seems like an interesting story.
if possible, proofread the chapters to fix the grammar issues (verb tense consistency, punctuation, some typos, dialogue, etc.)
I'm enjoying this book please finish
are there any plans to continue the novel?? its been a while since there were updates :(
flipping loving this! the characters are all so real and I love every one of them... except for tomato. He can jump off a bridge.
updates please
I have loved this book. yes there were really hard parts to read but how Hanna the author wrote the relationships and how the trust and love was found was brilliant.
I would give this 10+ if I could.
I also loved at the end of the book Hanna wrote a personal part about the trials go in relationship
this story is really awesome, readers must read.
Such a dark and twisted love story. I was totally hooked and couldn't stop reading.
It toooooooo long
- It started off great, but it got boring towards the end.
- The system becomes scarce by the end, and card extraction is practically nonexistent. Even when some cards do show up, they're not extractable, leaving MC unable to extract anything.
- There are noticeable plot holes in the story.
- The romantic subplot is weak.
- Read at your own risk.
Spoiler: Harem includes Lucy (Non-Marvel), Rain (Non-Marvel), Lorna, Jean, and another female Japanese character (who disappears after the Godzilla/X-Men Wolverine arc).
I'll try it out.