ChibakuMonster
This is a 10/10 novel its awesome the pace is kinda slow but I understand everybody has things to do ppl plz vote for this novel I highly recommend you won't regret
Great story so far, more chapters needed please completely binged it to this point, want more not completely satisfied yet...…..at al. Do a mass release pretty please
This seems like a non-fantasy novel that probably takes place in older times, like during the gold rush or something. This gives me an Indiana Jones feel and will probably be really similar. Though, you could also assume that a treasure-loving race is involved from the synopsis.
The characters in this novel are incredibly shallow and one dimensional. Its like the author took a personality/behavior trope and forgot to include all the other normal stuff that makes up a person. There is no variation in character behavior, whether its the MC, or his numerous harem members. Characters have two emotions at most. Angry, and not angry.The story itself is contrived and ill-thought out, taking place in a world where everyone other than the MC's love interest, or family, are people who look down on the MC and start fights or try to kill him over the smallest or dumbest of reasons. Other than that, it follows the typical eye-rolling trope of there always being someone stronger than the MC picking a fight with him, yet MC somehow ends up winning by 'acting tough' and face slapping (literally) every enemy he comes across.It cant really qualify as wish fulfillment, as its a bit too retarded for that. Instead it's reminiscent of a prepubescent boy's fantasy of what it means to be 'cool'.
This is one of those hidden gems… well not so hidden any more. It was hidden when I first found it, still at a dozen chapters, now it has risen to 10k collections and even entered privilege. The characters, for the most part, act real. Updates are stable. quality is better than a lot of novels up here.
Read few chapters writing quality is good worth looking into I would also like to know If you other tags or are you planning on adding other tags?
This novel is one of the best light novel I've read. It's funny (knowing a bit of Chinese culture will be even better), thought provoking (poems, maths etc), mysterious abilities and surprises and what's more, it's relatable to our modern times! No boring moments for me.. at a few times, it even put tears in my eyes!
I say it's a good novel because of the author's tenacity to see the novel through and backed by quiteadequate skills. However, the same as most of the concerns in the review section, the MCs have inconcistent character designs. It just feels weird how they seem to be bendable to the view of the current time. Like apart from their modern knowledge, they don't reflect any modern behaviours or ideologies from our society. They feel as if a character from the 19th century suddenly receiving engineering knowledges rather than someone from the modern society that tranmigrated to the 19th century. And this defect in their designs shows how they have weak views or will coming form the modern era when they became massive simps for Carolone and Amelia. Even if Amelia wasn't a spy to their comapny or Caroline is a reincarnated individual, bruh you can't be that naive of accepting Amelia to your company when both you(MCs) and Caroline are trying to create legacies that both you only have. They don't have the sense of wariness one would expect from someone coming from the modern era who have seen it all.
The thing is I don’t understand how in a place filled with magic a mother could die of childbirth. Truth be told when I first started reading this novel I thought it was a normal medieval theme novel so I didn’t think much of a mother dying of childbirth, but as the story keeps going on the grandma started showing magical means and medical pills etc. I find it hard to believe that the grandma fails to prepare to bring pill and magical medicine for her precious daughter in case things go wrong with the childbirth. And we still haven’t gotten a reasonable explanation about this topic. For this major plot hole this novel is a major failure.
Author Now You Are Failing Us With Zachary Annoying Relationship....I Don't Even Know Why You Introduced A Relationship In The First Place... Zachary Clearly Does Not Know Anything About Romantic Relationship And Having A Gf He Is Not Even Putting Efforts In It...Now It Developing Into A Drama Troupe
An extremely fast paced novel with clichés, still entertaining though, this is one of those novels that is just a fun and entertaining read, no need to venture too deeply into the intricacies of the work. Just relax and enjoy....
Such good story writing!
