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I absolutely Love this story. Everything from the FL & ML, supporting characters, and how the author uses Latin and other languages throughout the story when they converse. I don’t want to say too much so I’ll just say I’m In love and it’s a MUST read.
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I like it and hope it gets picked... I dont really no what else to say. The mc is a rich kid that's not brain dead like most mc's in this genre, the story progression seems to be good (it's only 40 chapters so there's not much to say tbh) and the power he gets seems interesting.Overall a pretty fun read and hopefully it will get picked, also how fo you vote for a story? I really can't seem to figure it out...
The novel's ok, well there's not much depth and the thinking of various characters is quite shallow (for these princes, generals, sect elders, reincarnator and others you'd expect much more complicated thoughts and focuses) but at least it isn't as bad as in these some "i am evil" novels. Also the novel somewhat reminds me of 'invincible Uncle Grandmaster' novel, albeit Uncle Grandmaster was much more chill, had better conversations, good comedy and included character growth/development even at the late chapters of the novel, at the same time being a one-punch-man where fights never lasted long. As for this one, well i doubt there will be any character development, but it's ok, there are no complicated processes and info dumps, it's for those who like "shocked expressions" of people that surround MC.
I fell in love...i wanted to find some interesting crime story....two handsome characters...they are so sweet together...you wouldnt be bored [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
If I could say what this is, it is a "masterpiece," it is the best sports novel in web novels. Although the system is OP which people complain about, it isn't that bad as in football you could still win or lose, he worked for it through training and rewards. Plus there are many factors that are included also. The character development is unique in a sense but is refined, I just hope that the MC doesn't date a gold digger in the future. The updates are constant, in which it is updating almost every day. The background of the world is the same as our real world with some real-life figures in the beautiful game. The character design is also really simple, I just hope that he can do stuff like recaps of what character looks like and their current stats. Overall the story is pretty good, although I don't want him to play with the DR Congo national team. Unless they get a huge boost in the squad which is probably going to happen. But I don't want him to play at AFCON which is not as popular as the Copa De Americas or the EUROS. But overall the story is perfect and I hope that it goes that way in the future.
too Chinese too TOO cliche and this this pure wish fulfilment
it has every Chinese cliche and brain dead decision and scenario you can have in any Chinese novel.
character are too 2d and predictable.
story is also too predictable
eg mc is orphan and have a lil sis what happened next they fall in love with each other.
it's just too corny and predictable.
if you like to read predictable, wish fulfilment and safe fluff with full of Cheesiness that this fir you.
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This one has some mildly gay scenes and straight up NTR apparently. I had no idea about the NTR as I just skimmed some of the beginning content up to 41. I will just say there's very extreme stuff in this and it likely was written more for women than straight men.
You definitely should have just rewritten some of this.
The main character goes from intelligent and pragmatic to merciful and naive within about 30 chapters, on the level of a Japanese MC at that. "Oh, you just tried to kill me? That's fine, you can leave." At first, the MC killed threats without hesitation, yet later, he risks his identity being discovered (which would instantly get him hunted by those far more powerful) to kindly ask a group "please don't hunt wisps anymore".
The foolish main character combined with the trope-filled writing killed the story for me, and likely will for anyone more fond of calculative/antihero MCs.
Why did I stop reading towards the first chapters? because this novel has this famous cliché which facilitates the plot where the mc is not recognized at his true value because he has a talent problem even if he is very talented you will see why so if people hate to follow the greatest who is not at his place or despised and dont act like he deserve for the start of the story it's not for you