But i hope the 2nd arc is a harem with F4 version so that i can ease my poor maiden heart from the ache it suffered from 1st arc
What a poorly written story
good novel . 500+chapters and ongoing
This is the best kingdom building genre story I have read on this platform, so far.Now, star review:writing quality- Unlike most stories consisting kingdom building and mmorpg genres, it doesn't have any name inconsistencies, and the grammar is good. Although, there is need for some editing, as a every other sentence, especially in later chapters, have jumbled up words. I know that it sounds contradictory to the 4- star that I have placed, but the point is that this simple mistake still doesn't take away from the story and its depth.story development- I have read till the latest chapter, binge read. I am so glad that the comment I made in the first or second chapter in regard with the sects and hidden families, hasn't proven to be true. I am also very happy that there is no annoying and unnecessary young master or mistress character yet. There is no dumb unnecessary face slapping trope yet. The characters are nicely fleshed out, and yet shrouded in some mystery. The MC is not out right dumb or edgy and evil af, he has his own ideals and got some good advisors to help him. Most importantly, there is no xia country forced into it, although there are many characters taken from chinese background, at least they are genuinely helpful and not like everything that has happened on this earth, is or was done by se chinese dude, I also like the inclusion of different cultures and there famous characters. Character design- Same as above.Updating stability- As I have written- I have binge read this book, hence, I am not sure about this. Though it shows 2chs per week.World background- This is like fresh breath of air, well not entirely, but still. Instead eastern empire and xia country, it has many factions and mc and his parents are from western front, at least according to knowledge provided till the latest chapter. There are still a lot of mysteries to be solved regarding the world background and it is enthralling.Finally I hope that this story don't get dropped or go on hiatus, and the quality be maintained pr improved.
Will you actually continue updating this story, or will you drop it like your previous ones?
It's a fast paced love horror novel. by the end of chapter one you'll already hit bit of a dark point where the guy is basically in a difficult spot. I recommend reading this if you're in need of seeing people die.
This novel is full of blatant contradictions, repetitive passages of text, and an overabundance of unnecessary or redundant explanations. It is an absolutely dreadful novel nowhere near deserving of as high a score as it currently has.
Invayne I am a fan of your work all your web novels have me hooked my most favourite is Princess Knight! So far this one has me hooked! Keep up the good work I'm rooting for you ^_^
Overall it isn’t a bad novel but when you only release 40 chapters and the novel is based on using a fusion system and the system doesn’t get used till 40 chapters in and that is also when the updates stop this deserves a negative star
NO POTENTIAL JUST RUBBISHPATHETIC MC POOR PLOTTRASH SYSTEM........................................
Even if the story is good, for me the translation and mistakes in writing kills it. Please hire a good editor who knows his job.Please improve your English
This is a really nice story. I liked the beginning and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters! Author, please keep going and give us your best!