I been looking for a good story for aeon :) finally found it
First time in my life, I've ever read something other than MMORPG novel inside a fantasy world. Execution is flawless, MC is actually KIND and HUMBLE, something that I haven't seen in quite a while. Keep up the good work.
6 chapters in and if you take out all the comments from random people about how its impossible/possible or making fun of him you really only have about 1.5 chapters everything else is filler. 6 chapters in and he is still on stage slowly explaining his idea.
I have read the first 25 chapters so my review is based on tHose chapters alone. So far the novel is extremely well written, the author does a really good job of providing details in a manner that doesn’t feel like it’s being rammed down your throat. Fight scenes are fairly well written and a good amount of back strong to both the character and the world is provided, though I do hope that the author provides more detail about the universe since it seems fairly interesting. Over all a really good start to a novel and I hope the author continues to release “the goods” for us peasants.
Wow... So cool!
I love how your novel has some elements of bleach anime inside because I'm a big fan of that anime!
Although there are some comma placement errors and so on, your story is very interesting!
And, to be honest, I'm even starting to feel a little insecure now... Haha! XD
Good novel but I disagree with the fact this isn't a fan fiction, much of the lineage here is only from Vikings and in reality all of Ragnar's sons that are notable (aside from a passing mention) come from his 2nd and third wife (Ragnar met lagertha when he went to avenge his grandfather and she was key to his victory)
This is probably one of the best webnovels I’ve read in such a long time. I don’t mind the gruesome and lack of empathy in the main character. In fact, it’s one of my favorite aspects about him since he’s an antagonist protagonist. This story literally put me at the edge of my seat waiting in anticipation for the next chapter. The characters, dialogue, and plot are top tier and I can’t wait for more chapters. I love this story so much and I’m happy it’s back!
It's very bad, translation is quite bad. I've seen sentences likes "the world has been established for 10 years" and things like this that don't make sense. Not to mention that when the narrator talk about the family members, they use the family name so it end up with sentences like this:"Fang told Fang that Fang should eat too much ... " It is incredibly annoying to understand what is going on. Not recommended if you want to keep at least some of your brain cells alive.
Actually entertaining.....in my opinion.What we gave here is a good classic xianxia read with a solid plot and good character development. You can visibly see the mentality of the mc change slowly.So if you like cultivation, face slapping and other tidbits of xianxia, delve in here.
Honestly a really good read so far and as there are not many chapters as of yet cant really give a full review, but if you like 40K chances are you will like this!
it's good ☺️...,............................................................................................................................
good work. there is lack of LotM fanfics on this platform. hope you don't drop ... a suggestion of mine would be to post this fanfic in the fanfiction section instead of novels section to increase the readership. fanfics in the novels section rarely get any attention