The plot of the book is good but it needs a lot of improvements. There are only 33 chapters but twice it seemed to be a complete different book with different characters. The character development seems choppy for the main characters but two deep for minor characters like Jay. Has potential
Good book , enjoyed reading it.
Started out great, but needs some grammar work. Aside from that, a very fun read.
good chapter!!
Honestly speaking this kick of this book is amazing. wonderful author, already added to libery
Just morning in here but will not be left behind with your updates, excited to read more
I enjoyed reading this book ...
I'm in love with this book so much i can't put it down
Wonderful Narration...
Update Please
Absolutely loved this book!! I'm never disappointed when reading.... great job please keep writing!! ...️
It's extremely erotic. kudos