Mc is a hypocrite, what's the point of being married at all if you're just gonna go chase girls all day... Mc needs to learn better self control sigh
so far the novel is very interesting, the characters are well written and the spelling is nice, but I have a question. Is this a harem? I don't know why I feel like I've seen this novel elsewhere with the harem tag. Personally I hate the harem with all my being so I would like to know how to read this novel or not.
Translation Quality: 5. Nothing wrong here.Stability of Updates: 5. Nothing wrong here.Story Development: 1 star. Oh boy. Hey, let me ask you something. If you received a potion (drug) that'd help you lose 20 lbs a day, would you be worried or thankful to the maker of it? (Thankful, obviously. There's no way losing 20 lbs in a single day'd have any adverse effects, right?)What would you do if you found a drunk woman on the streets, and she wasn't sober enough to give you her number or address to send her home? (Bring her to a hotel, obviously. It's not like you're pretty much right next to a police station...) Overall, Story Development is absolutely the worst, I'm not even exaggerating. Character Design: 1. Extremely forced, the characters in this novel are the least realistic thing I've seen on this site, excluding the R18 fanfictions. See (Story Development).World Background: 1. Urban fantasy, face slapping-esque, harem novel. With dumbed-down characters, to boot. I love urban fantasy, but this is just the same cultivation-modern day novel recycled over and over again, and these novels all tend to be horrible. It is horrible, actually.2.6 stars. Lowest possible rating I can give in terms of the story, it's just crap.
This novel will motivate even the laziest student to study. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Based on past books of author, there will no be any grammatical mistakes, plot loopholes..etc Beleive me the novel would be wonderful journey for our ever-growing addiction towards novels.
Alright, the score is pretty low, but it's reasonable... I think. anyway.Translation quality is OK, but could be better. the phrasing is quite bad to be honest. If the author wrote it like it's translated, then this must be their debut work, because it feels really... I really don't know how to say it, without ****** people interpret what I've said in a wrongly. but, the ******st analogy? emmm.... Childish, but planned. or is very innocent in a way, but at least the story it self seems to have been planned ahead properly.The MC himself, is quite childish also, or even quite innocent. it's like a man was put in the body of a child, and the childishness seeped in, and erased the *****, but left the memories of the future. Also, things seem to go rather well for this MC, but it's strange. I honestly have no interpretation of why I think this series has a strange flow, but I have this weird feeling as I read it. not a bad feeling mind you.World background... Again, I must say, 'honestly', the world isn't as of yet too far thought out, but the actual 'world' around the character seems to be developing, like, housing market, stocks and so on... oh, and computer development. I wish this MC could think of smart things to do with the internet, it really wouldn't be to hard to make a website worth money around that time, it would just take a bit of development, and financial stability. but, as long as he invented YouTube, he'd be fine. I think it isn't banned in China, so it should be fine...And my final conclusion to my thoughts about this story...Read it if you wanna, It's not the best, but it has some interest elements to it. So if your here for lighthearted rebirth or should we say, revert to an alternate time line, 18 years before, where the MC isn't a genius, but get's a better body and memory right off the bat as a consolation prize, but doesn't know how to truly capitalize on his future knowledge, however, does in fact know how to make Some use of the new body. My last thing to say is: The first chapter is BS, it almost makes no sense except TRYING to explain to you, the MC was all of a sudden, reborn for no apparent reason. Apparently a different, and even better body/memory.However, it doesn't really explain, If he was suddenly reborn, or if he was reborn for quite some time, and this is likely the translator/editors fault for confusing me. and I must point out, that the Author really wanted to get the character out of high-school, but still give the character SOME very minor Introduction and slightly developing the world background.and to finish off what I'm saying... the Story is very fkn high paced, has a very small character development phase, but as I said at the start, I'm pretty sure this is the authors debut piece, or best work at the time of release... if not, then I truly feel sorry for this author, being able to write, but is inadequate in their understanding of the human psyche, emotions, rational and thus creating an inferior product, that is unworthy of their actually writing talents."
Sooo i tead a good bit of the translations. I just have to stop. The author introduces the main character as some guy who is barred from his dream(to be a pilot of a mecha) due to the Entire World decoding your genes ned to be perfect for you to not kill yourself piloting these death machines. Then it spends some time making fun of the main character due to him being *****, and its explanations for that are reasonable. He was raised by the most brilliant Autistic scientist in the Galaxy and the scientist planned out his education to try to force hom on the path of completing the scientists dreams. So he isn’t street smart, but is like 6years ahead of his class, and mayby a year or two past hos professors in scientific knowledge. Having established the above, the author introduces the virtual world amd school life(college) for the main character. All of the Virtual World gets a one star. It exists for the sole purpose of the main character to blow himself. New characters in the virtual world may choose from several mecha to use. The animal mecha all specialize in something, and have ARMOR. The human mecha has no specialties, and no ARMOR but can choose one weapon upon entering each fight(a knife or rifle)The main character naturaly chooses the human mech, and the world derides him for choosing something that doesnt have ARMOR. Note i am capitalizing this word because The Main Character One Shots EVERYTHING!! ARMOR is the authors ****ty excuse for why no one else is allowed to one shot stuff, but the main character ineshots armored stuff all the time. There is no ******* because all weapons apparently one shot mecha and the entire world is so stupid they choose the mecha that are alowed down by useless ARMOR instead of learning how to dodge. The school life is a terribly writtenharem. Like a professor saying “mayby i should rape you to tie you down to my research project” bad. So theres the story. I am dropping this because i don’t see any character growth happening really(the main character always makes perfect decisions so he has no where to grow) and the combat sucks as it is nothing but and he amazingly perfectly dodges the unblockabe super skill then stabs them with a knife. Victory to the authors BS. Enjoy your read, don’t start regretting the time you spend on this later.
Loved this story...add and Danielle story should be awesome if you write it...jace needs more kids
I know Reina’s comeback will be so crazy and I can’t wait for it
The storyline is good and one to follow. But the grammar is awful and really difficult to read along with in most sections; alot of spelling errors. I wonder with the excessive number of errors if English is a first language or not to the author.
Would definitely recommend.
I love this book. I can't wait to readd book 2