I highly recommend this Novel
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This story has me totally invested, I really like the portrayal of mental illnesses, the background is really great, and even if the MC doesn’t really talk, you can still understand him and I think that is really great. The only mistakes I have noticed is just a few words one word before/after where they should be, and one where the wrong form of word was used, overall this story is really great and has good potential!
From what I’ve read so far, the book is very good. It's just that the author did a good job of making Sofia annoying and hatable. Too good of a job qctually...
It is a pity, that this book was not trasnslated. This is one of the most unique story in this site. Abd tge mtl is practically unreadable. n
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note- I am a big amateur when it comes to writing reviews.but I will still give it a try.1. My Favorite part of this novel was the writing quality. I think that the author put a fair amount of work pleasing the readers with his writing capabilities which he absolutely did.2. As you all may know, the story revolves around a protagonist who got transmigrated into a game that he used to play. and the bad news is that he got put into the body of a person who got NTRed which explains the title. The story revolves a lot about fighting and a lot of cuckolding (not the mc whos doing the cuckolding because he is actually the one getting cucked but ofc its part of the development of the story).one of the key factors on why the novel got such a bad rating is because of how inconsistent the updates and development were. I can clearly understand that some people are just getting mad because of how slow the story is, and that is where the inconsistency comes into role. imo, if you are going to try writing a slow-paced story, I would recommend uploading more chapters per week. 1 chapter per week is not really ideal if you want your story to be highly rated and so on. It may be because the author has some work to do irl and because it is only a hobby but it may have been a bit better to upload a bit more than once per week. (for example villain cultivator, endless path infinite cosmos etc)I actually got a bit confused about the choices of the protagonist considering that he has played the game before and why he did not make use of his knowledge. I mean, if he did not even have knowledge about the game why would we readers even need the 'useless' information? I mean should he not have a bit of an advantage so that he does not start from "scratch"?I wont really pick on the protagonists development because I actually considered the amount of chapters it has unlike those people complaining about why the protagonist is such a wuss and so on.overall it is decent and it couldve had a better, overall "look" to it if it was less slow paced but thumbsup for the author.
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Why Webnovel editors? Do you do this just to torture us poor folk?Even the title of the novel has typos!What's worse the protagonist is called Fang Yuan. For this superficial idiot to share the name of one of fiction's greatest protagonists. I can't tolerate this heresy! What this protagonist should've been named is Yun Che. Or better yet Zhang Ye.
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)