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Both of them are eternal, yet their hearts seem to miss a connection at times, preventing this "small message" from reaching each other. It's heartwarming how they gradually comprehend their emotions without being overly complicated. Their love is a beautiful exchange, built on trust, support, and mutual acceptance. The translations, though occasionally imperfect, are refreshing and worth reading.
I recall reading this a while back, and initially, I thought it was decent but lacked a lasting impact due to its quick pace and tendency to be easily forgotten. Despite that, I found the experience somewhat enjoyable yet frustrating at times because of the author's pacing.
Here's a summary of my mixed feelings:
Pros:
1. The characters, especially the heroine and others, have substantial depth, with well-developed backgrounds and personal growth throughout the story. We witness their transformation as they navigate various situations.
2. The author's approach to love developments can be amusing, albeit sometimes frustrating, with unexpected twists that are both witty and realistic.
3. The plot is straightforward, following a hero (MC) who acquires knowledge of his past life and future events, aiming to change his destiny and save the world. This simplicity keeps the story engaging without veering off into unnecessary complexity.
Cons:
1. The protagonist's motivations and understanding of love are shallow, relying on simplistic explanations.
2. The pacing and foreshadowing are severely lacking, causing confusion for the reader and detracting from the overall experience. The author frequently drops hints about future events but executes poorly, making it feel like a premature reveal of the climax rather than a build-up.
3. The "buhi buhi" quirk, initially amusing, becomes repetitive and serves no significant purpose beyond being a defining trait of the MC. The execution and subsequent interactions with the trait feel forced.
4. The writing style can be informal and occasionally difficult to follow, with colloquial language and occasional use of slang that may require translation or research.
In conclusion, the novel is alright but not exceptional. It's more suitable for binge-reading rather than weekly consumption, as it tends to accumulate dust on shelves. It has its moments of enjoyment but struggles with pacing and character development.
The 'part 2' of the chapters are missing, there's actually supposed to be a part two, but it just shows the first part of the chapter, smh
never felt more called out in my life fr
I'm about 1200 chs in and I stopped to marinate it a bit. But some people are saying Beyond the Timescape is a better translation. Should I stop reading this one? Where can I find the other translation?
Does anyone know of any similar sports novels?
I agree with you on this
Agreed, when I started reading I think it was at 200 chaps, quickly caught up and kept up till 953 where I dropped it. I honestly kinda liked the game part, I just read and turn my brain off, but when they came irl it just got super boring and drawn out and couldn't really get in the zone or whatever you would call it. I don't necessarily dislike the story but I can't stand to read it anymore.
NTR ??? I know first girl get fuc* one but say me there are more ntr??
You haven't read Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint yet???
is no one gonna take over the translation?
ヽ(。◕o◕。)ノ.Wow! You're amazing! I only know 2 languages which I am fluent and another 1 which I learned but totally forgot ?
