It's really awesome and I like Dragons .Man they are so cool.
I also started writing a new novel "Flighters" . Am new and Don't know if it's good or not .please help me review it . I hope I can learn from you
Sad to see it go this way but was overall a very enjoyable read. This was one of those books that I couldn’t wait to update daily, even though the plot was common.
It was good until you started trying to make him a "good" person when I was looking for a mc the destroys everything and then I tried to push on but...it was to much when you dropped a baby on the 10 year old mc's lap forcing him to take care of it...which he does(because it looks like his sisters)...
This is a great story. I was really into it from the very first chapter, though i did see some grammar mistakes here and there. The flow is nice and the characters seem good enough. I'll be reading more! Good work
What did I just read? I actually wasted my time reading this only to find out that MC actually gets together with his cheating wife? Are you joking me author? I am just so mad that I will give 1 star, sorry. I usually want to make proper review, but I now hate my life because reading this story.
Very good novel and from what I see in the interactions he is an intelligent protagonist. Great great great great great great great great great great great great great great
I was so immersed into the storyline I forgot to check for errors ?But one thing I know is that this is a beautiful write-up. From the writing style to the plot development, to the introduction of characters, it was all well done.The plot progression was just perfect, there was no lag nor was there any confusion. I loved reading it and I will continue supporting it ??
amazing well built plot and world building that will draw you in.Author is also so gente to provide readers a map in every chapter comment section, and it works wonderfully.Lots of unique, funny, quirky characters, and I feel like a lot more has to be introduced yet. SPOILERALSO I'M ANSIOUSLY WAITING FOR WHEN HE FINALLY DO SOMETHING WITH THIA!
THIS IS GOOD. There is so much potential here, Good grammar, unique plot, very nice development.
The way things are progressing is smooth and easy to understand.
Female leads also have a personality.(which is quite uncommon for this time of novel). Little tragedy in the beggining but i don’t think there will be more.
Check this novel out and you won’t regret it.
hello author san. I just finished reading the entire story and I found it interesting. so please ? dont drop this and keep writing. once again thx for the story.
Author keeps typing he or she makes it very annoying and hard to read
Amazing new concept of story of MC being lowkey, i even read the mtl haha.That system is really no help to MC except for the end of his life span and breakthrough.