"Each group, make an orderly line and take turn drawing lots."
-Farming(15)
The other dragon landed in front of them, in between Sir Zah and the twins and the dead black dragon, with a powerful whump of displaced air. The red dragon had a shining white mane trailing from the back of its head between its horns all the way to the tip of its tail.
Through their ability testing period these few days, they found out an important aspect of her [Telepathy] abilities.
I'm not one to usually enjoy Sci-fi stories, but this one took me by the hands with the character design and the plot surrounding it. I'm excited to uncover more.
I’ve been absolutely hooked on this novel! Your world-building and character development are phenomenal, and as a fellow writer I must say I really love your writing style.I recently started my own sci-fi novel, The Strongest Interstellar Soldier System, and it’s been an exciting journey so far. It’s about a young man, Caden Arden, who inherits a mysterious system from his father, a former traitor to humanity, and embarks on a mission to prove himself while navigating a high-tech, interstellar world. I’d love for you (and any fellow readers here!) to check it out and share your thoughts. Your support would mean the world to me as I grow as a writer. Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope we can support each other in this incredible journey!
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I like it that MC is fierce and doesn't sit back and let others dictate his life to him. I also like how creative the writer is in regards to the superhero plot. Travis certainly is an interesting character, who I would love to see level up from weak to strong. Okay flow of writing and chapters are understandable, only wish there were more than three chapters. Good job Author-san. A good read that I highly recommend to all WN readers.
Hey, It's the author here, shameless review, I know, in reality I probably would have about a 4-3.5 in the grammar part but I know that this story will be a page turner in the future, so I hope your ready for the journey of the two brothers.
We need more readers! This novel is the definition of decent and fine writing techniques and skills. Great grammars and not much writing mistakes which is good since many readers are picky about it. The first three chapters goes with the flow like a river and it doesn't start off real rough like other novels. The only problem I may find is the updates but I understand that the writer has their busy schedules and has other first priorities in reality outside of being an author so updates aren't a rush and I appreciate your great effort. Saved to my library! ✔✔
A really interesting start. It gave me the feeling of what Japanese Light novels with a slice of life aspect would usually give. It is a fresh read. And I enjoyed the first person POV used here. It is quite well done if I say so myself.
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