Great just great
amzing book, with everything going in a good flow.loved the character of faiyzan. Waiting for the new chapter release noe. hope it comes soon.
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The story is great and very engaging. I really like the writing here however, I must say that there are some grammatical mistakes here and there. If you can turn a blind eye to it, than you will most likely love this story.
My thinking is that this story will unfold beautifully around chapter 30 or so. I feel like the author is just building toward something great. Hope the best!
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The choices the system gives aren't bad, it's the MC that makes terrible choices. He makes choices that always lead fights, face slapping and just really annoying. There is simpler way do it ? and this is not it. It's just trash with a self righteous MC that thinks his word is law and anyone who disagrees deserves death ?
Amazing poetry, deep thinking... amazing. Although I was a little lost at first, I found my way back a few chapters later. Still, it's something I would not be able to put together. Keep it up!
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Exceptionally great so far. Syntactically a few things might be changed but in general, the story streams exceptionally pleasantly. Some of the time it may be a bit surged but keep going, Really good so far. Well done author!
Story has got an interesting synopsis. The writer has done a great job on developing the story. The few chapters I've read are intriguing and very captivating. The writer has done an amazing job.
A thoroughly interesting read with the standard weak to strong genre. A necromancer skill that has been looked down upon,is the initial start of this story. The MC is gifted a hidden class and from there begins his climb to greatness. So far I have read the 40 chapters released and have found them all well written and easy to follow. I am hoping this guy doesn’t turn out to be a low class EQ MC which will be a huge turn off. Fantasy is one thing but when the MC becomes unlikeable then the novel fails.Anyways, I will be interested to see how this develops.