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Really giving me Squid Game vibes here, what with the old man and all. I have zero complaints about this novel, as I very thoroughly enjoyed Squid Game. This isn't a rip-off or anything though, as it comes with it's own unique twists (you can read it for yourself to see what I mean).Only thing that I would recommend to the author is... well, writing more. Daily updates are critical to gaining readership. Keep up the good work!
okay, everyone reading this should just go and read the story already. I love this story, because it's written in a way that keeps my attention, and I end up binge reading a bunch of chapters at one go. I'm terrible at doing reviews, so just go and read it, okay?!
I’m sorry, ot seems like a great book but no one, and I mean NO ONE, is that dense or stupid. It just completely lost me. I get trying to create a story but it really just feels forced.
30 out of 70 is MC's Progress. 70 is explain here explain there info here info there, even side characters will explain everything about him/her even it is not needed. Do you know the feeling of eating food but its hard to swallow? like eating rock
read up to chaptor 21 which is the most updated chaptor right now. I can say I really like the plot, and the ideas that the author seems to try to be going with. with that said though, 4 chaptors of what I would call worthless back story is kinda a let down. I can see certain back stories in the future but 1 back story taking up 3 chaptors alone is a problem. that back story was not needed tbh. I just feel 3 chaptors were wasted on which could have been action or something else. chaptor 21 is also a start of another back story so we will get atleast 5 or 6 chaptors in a row of back story that is prolly wasted chaptors. good thing is atleast I am not paying for it or I would be a unhappy camper.
Update to my previous review
This really is a series that shows fantastic improvement in quality as it carries on. The dedication to the story shown by the author is phenomenal and the handling of multiple characters' developments at once is done amazingly. Overall, very fun and very enjoyable. [img=recommend]
I don't mind reading slice of life novels but this is too much. 200 chapters in and it's only been two days in the novel. just makes it too slow. it was around chapter 30 when they were at the old age home and made plans to have a party three days later and now we are around chapter 200 and it's still not at the party.
also don't like the fact that he knows of three people who want kidnap and r*pe his wife and he just guys... meh I'll teach them a lesson if they go to far.
This is indeed a dark romance. I feel sadness and anxiety towards Renee. I hope everything will be fine with her. There are a lot of chapters ahead and this gives me hope that everything will be all right.
And if talking about style and grammar, then I can tell that this novel is really well written. Characters and their personalities are also well developed. In general, this story is worth of attention.
Really interesting so far, hopfully it gets chossen! Looking forward to reading morenof anyone know the raws name lmk!
It's a miracle! Webnovel actually has a promising novel now! Well, if you compare it to the other novels this will be 100 percent better, No CAP!
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