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50 chapters inno problems with the writing easy to read and the mistakes there is aren't a big deal as there not often. Over all the story is fine but at same time many forced situations and from my initial thoughts on what the story would be from the description of a mc that has to pave his own way in cultivation no matter how stacked against the odds thing are against him with his background and cultivation talent have to say he's had things being pretty convient the whole time. For some reason author has made the concept of strength a cultivator should have at each stage come off pointless. Just makes everything seem completely forced when you have the mc who still at the first tier in cukvation being able to inflict wounds or now even kill someone multiple tiers above his level. Even if the excuse is they were tired I don't see it working why because even a tired body builder is still going to be stronger then a average person, a tired long distance runner is still going to be able to out run a average person. Let alone people that should be hundreds of times stronger then the mc and having abilities like spiritual sense and experienced many years of battle compared to the mc who's still new to all of this. World background honestly is lack luster I don't expect to know of higher worlds or other kingdoms by now but at least give the places the mc is at sense of existence. Descriptions on the size of the location, what's there what it looks like and the people and what there doing. This is good filler and at same time as long as done right meaning full filler because it fleshes out the world the mc is at. The Author deserves praise on the upload rate very rare see a author put out 14 chapters a week when so many struggle to just put out 1.
I read quite a few chapters and the world building is good. No info dump, everything is explained with the story progress. I like novel where the MC has powerful cheats and grows faster. But I personally am not into the novels with alchemy so this novel is not for me. The grammar is little bit bbad. Iam not a native English speaker so that doesn't concern me.So if you like all these things the novel is great.
It starts out alright, but honestly the main character is just incredibly stupid about everything. He never once seems to think about decisions that cause major world changing events past how it affects him and like 3 other people. He's told thing he can do are incredibly rare, even for people realms above him, and still seems shocked when they're called impossible or godlike. Insists on humans being the most important race, despite having all of his followers being magical beasts on different kinds. But not that one kind, they're evil. Starts a war with the only evil kind of beasts over 2 villages of common people, doesn't even consider that even more of his precious humans will die because of it because he think he'll get away with killing beasts whose master is one of the highest realms mentioned so far. The cultivation system is constantly on the back burner as the MC "learns" smithing techniques that he picks up because of the special fire he got.
Webnovel doesn't understand that it has become monotonous and boring. but these novels still keep coming, i reckon there is no quality control on webnovel
The novel isn’t bad overall i would say about 3.5 but I’m giving it a 1 because I read for the snow dragon at the start and he still hasn’t gotten it
Actually, this novel could be interesting for the newbies but for me who have read quite a lot of cultivation and system type novel, it becomes quite boring and system feels quite a lot controlling type, mc doesn't have his own thinking capabilities, everything is overhyped, everyone becomes his enemies just because he spends money, a lot of asskissing, ugh... so author should understand why I gave these ratings. don't judge me by the level I'm at because I have read quite a lot of novels from other websites and apps too and they don't even ask for money like this Webnovel app but I still use it to read the starting instead of random picking.
Fucking great novel. no boring tropes amazing world building only complain is the way side characters are used. The story follows a ****** but interesting path which allows you to remember improper moments or characters from back when. The cultivation system is not heavily focused on on a good way since it allows more interesting storyline instead of the generic repitition of how oh I just broke through now you will be doomed
The characters have changed a lot over the course of this book. As it draws to an end, you can't help but wonder what one of the main characters is going to do next.
i really like idea of your book its a fantastic story and i hope you continue to update i really loved it and i also recommend everyone to add it to their reading list
I really love this book. Keep updating. Please. Thank you for writing this book. I was looking for a new book to read and I came across yours. Is well wirtten. Keep up the good work!??
Amazing book. I loved it. Looking forward to more chapters. ???????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????
