Best cultivation novel I've read it has good power levels and time actually passes for the mc unlike the other novels where the mc is like 20 and is stronger than 1000 year olds.Unique story about the first cultivator never seen anything like thatIf you like high power levels and somewhat apathetic mcAnd just a well written story then this is definitely it for you and no romance.
where can I read this?! what was the name of it?
Hello, shameless author here!If you’re reading this then that means you’ve chosen to give this story a shot. I’d like to mention some things before you dive into the story.This story is a slow burn! There be fights, yes, but it’ll come when it’s needed. I don’t intend to force scenes or anything at all, I’m trying my best to make it all feel natural, so I hope you bear with me for that.Will there be action? Yes! Will there be progression? Yes! But they’ll only come when the characters stick their nose into such situations—which they will. The Mc, Elmer, is a naive young boy who just relocated from the countryside to a city, so some of his decisions may seem weird and all, but I promise you that he does grow.The Worldbuilding will be slow, as I will not partake in any infodumps, so I hope you have a bit of patience since all the countries and kingdoms won’t be spelled out to you at once.Volume 1 is already completely written and will be updating twice a day on webnovel until its completion here.With that out of the way, you may proceed, Lurker. Oh, and please don’t skip the prologue. It’s necessary, and don’t worry, I try my best to avoid info dumps in my story. I can’t do it even if I wanted to!T/N: This story’s magic system is inspired by LOTM’s, but that’s where it stops, the magic system. In no way does this story borrow any plot line from the world of LOTM. I’ve heard that the premise is similar to that of COI (LOTM Book 2), so I’m putting this out there to curb any confusion about that.I began to read LOTM to grasp the concept of eldritch horror and whatnot, same as I did for “The call of Cthulhu” and as I’m doing currently with bloodborne so as not to fail in my own story in that aspect. Therefore, if by some intervention of the divine beings any similarities are noticed, take note that it was purely coincidental, unless I intentionally reference LOTM world, which would probably be pretty glaring if that happens. Thank you for reading.
I see that the story is discontinued probably because it's missing a lot of details. I love overpowered stories like this, but it's like you went to one subject to the next without hardly any context. You need to add more details to the characters and what he's doing. where's the villain of story you mentioned a tyrant magician, but I can hardly believe if he is attacking nearby territories that he would simply leave the mc alone to build his kingdom? I get that it appears that you're trying to create a slice of life story, but you are too fast. Keep jumping from one thing after another with hardly any details. if you plan on redoing this book, I suggest that you make sure that there are details in the novel.
it has a great potential and storyline. But i think each chapter is too short. i hope author would make changes to this
I guess I didn't find this in time for you to continue writing but with that being said life can keep you busy and if you're not sure or dislike something when it's not necessary there no point in keeping on going I guess lol anyways best of luck!
This is my first time reading a story like this.. Im started to love realistic fiction. I was to touched with the story, it makes my heat beats faster.. I love you mr author! Please add more chapter! ?
Fanboying for a Friend ??Hahahaha I know the author, my namesakes are in one of his masterwerks, nepotistic bias maybe..........but really True Dawns books are quirky and fun.True his MCs can be a little OP, but if you're not into that why are you reading on WN?The first time I am reading one of TD's 'human' lead pieces, so for me this is book is unusual. However the MC is quite a cool cucumber, and so far just your normal boy-next-door. He has a loving Ma & Pa and his lttle bro is not a douche either. There's going to be some family fun in this book, and that's A O.K. with me ?? So 17chaps in... so far so goody.Quality not Quantity please bud-E ?
Nice story and nice writing style. I felt like I was in the book. The synopsis is great and first chapter was very touching. I will be back soon with a much time. Keep going! I cheer you!
now this is a book i wanted....................................................................................................................
Introduce the club and history at the start it's situations, the timeline should have been the first thing mentioned. the transfers and the amounts are unrealistic. the timeline is completely off there's no mention of when Ferran, Lewandowski or Gundogan were signed. the author forgot that the season began late that year because of Copa America and Euro.
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