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It is still early days but this is a good but fairly cliche story so far. The most obvious issue is the desperate need of an editor. Not just for grammar/spelling assistance but also to help cut out unneeded duplication. For example, we don't need to see the character screen that many times when literally nothing has changed.
I liked the idea of your novel as it does not repeat the plot of your novel is wonderful, and at the end of each chapter you write mysterious sentences that make me and my brother yearn
shame its harem, i was interested. .
I liked the whole Alien, Planet hopping, Battle Royale concept that the Author has implemented. Also I don't know why, maybe because I'm a geek for games and survival genre in general, I found the forst four chapters really interesting. The characters aren't described well as of now since it only 4 chapters, but definitely a good story ?
...........................................................................................................it is good i just hope u dont drop it.
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SAO is one of my favourite anime series and it's light novel is the icing on the cake...It's fun, action and adventure.Aryan_N did a great job while posting this light novel's English translation...It's a top ranked anime series and I love the plot and characters that Reki Kawahara the writter of this light novel
I don’t know who is translating this novel but they are doing a very poor job at it. They forget to delete already translated scripts and when they do translate they mess up the names of things or the flow or the words is butchered.An example would be how the changed Constitution to Physical Strength, and Agility to Agile. They already had strength as an attribute why are they trying to confuse readers with two of the same words for different things. Another example is how when explaining that an item would drop on death they said, “a task item that fell 100% dead and could only be taken away alive” also, do they even play games? It’s a quest item not a task item.
I love it!! I don't usually read this genre but I loved this. It makes me want to play games, lol??This is one great book, no one will regret reading this. Good luck for the competition, author❤️
Its a novel with a great start but after chapter 80 the author is off the main story rails and tons of fillers and rubbish characters overshadow the mc and main plot. It may make the story full of depth but unneccessary plotholes is just showing the author is running out of steam and shooting airplanes randomly.