I understand he wants the slow and steady phase, but his weakness is definitely annoying.
You know if anywhere else has better translation? If so please let me know. Thanks!
Author more plss
I love the novel thanks author
Lin Che!!!!! nooo!!!! updates!!!! hurry!!!
Everything's fine, from the inconsistencies of the cultivation levels to the small(or big) plot holes that I've noticed. However, what's not fine is that, every girl seems to be almost raped by everyone until mc comes. What's also not fine is the choice of words of the translator/s or editor/s, for example, using the word "r*pe" instead of "assault" or "violate", for real, this novel is so uncomfortable, it feels like the author has some fetishes for like nearly raped girls or something, also nearly every man that have 2 or more chapters screentime are horny b*stards that just want to rape every girl, f*cking sh*t I'm done with this garbage.Feel free to criticize me, correct me or something, maybe I'm the wrong one.
As a Master's (Top 500) League of Legends player in Season 8, I would think I have an edge over other readers in this certain type of genre, so here are my two cents on the novel.
The novel itself is great, I thoroughly enjoyed each of the chapters. Good writing along with good pacing makes the story an interesting read. It has decent enough characters and game backstory to make it enjoyable.
The story does seem unrealistic to a certain sense. I think a good MOBA story boils down to how much the author itself understands the genre of MOBA's. Although he does explain the basic nitty-gritty of game mechanics, he fails to mention any important or groundbreaking that players with more skill would notice, and that will have an effect on how far the novel can progress linearly.
It's fine since these guys are middle schoolers and are still learning about the game, but if he wants to bring this novel from a lighthearted read to an actual quality MOBA novel, it's going to take a lot of work.
Overall, still a good read. There's no other MOBA novel to compare this to, so I guess it is a staple. There are things that could be improved, but the things the author does writes, he does correctly.
Nicely written by the author. looking forward to more adventures from Alex
Looks like I found myself a gem, I love your story so far author-nim!
I have also just read the first few chapters yet but I can see a lot of potential in your story.
I'm not the biggest fantasy fan however I think that many people, who like fantasy, would enjoy this novel as the setting and the plot are very intriguing.
Just like the others already pointed out, there are a few grammar errors but all in all I didn't see it as a big problem. Aside from that, I like your writing style:)
I will continue reading this so keep it up author!
Hello, I'm the author of this book. The chapter updates will be slow after chapter twenty due to the fact I still go to school, but that won't affect the quality of the story as far as it can go.
The cover itself and the illustrations of the characters will be there as I continue to write.
May your reading experience be pleasant, and thank you!
So far, this novel has been a very good read.