rivana got new chance to live here life alongside someone from her past azrael intrigues me keep it up waiting for their love story and revenge against her killers
The book is great, looking forward to how he is going to use those runes, they seem way too great to be true. Love it. ......................
Shameless Author's second account here, Honest rating:World and magic development: 3/5 Smut scene: 100/5
Keep it up author, the more I read the more I want to even read more. this is interesting , keep up your good work
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Well its rly terrible cuz the mc is a wimp his Mothers/sisters are Hoes Like the one who takes his V-card
overall this is a decent book with a decent start. I may revisit it later on when more chapters are out.the reaction from those around him as he goes from Tyrant to beloved ruler is dynamic. Although where there is lower loyalty it would be nice to see more logical and cunningness instead of the stereotype of 'impossible' the dump villain cant't believe what's happening. On the opposite the loyal are blind followers with there characters done nicely... but could have more depth to them and individuality instead of just following the lord around like a bunch of lackies
This is an entertaining superhero story that should appeal to fans of the genre. Although I haven't read a huge amount of superhero stories, I enjoy them and think this one has lots of potential. Style: The style of this story is casual and pretty direct, there's no purple prose or over description of things really, it's straightforward and pretty clear about what's going on. Grammar: I think I noticed a couple typos, but nothing that really distracted me from the story at all, so I didn't have any problems with the grammar, it reads like normal to me!Characters: Hope seems like a cool main character who I look forward to following as she grows. I'm not sure what the future holds for her but I think she will continue to develop strengths and hopefully become part of a meaningful community. Story: I am not very familiar with superhero stories in general, but so far this seems like a good set-up for lots of interesting events to take place. The super powers mentioned seem strong and though I can't really guess where the plot is going to go, it should be interesting. Overall a promising start up to where I've read!
Pretty good I like supporting new writings and this one has a lot of potential.
Author which Ai you used to create the cover of your novel
ive been procrastinating this for so long but since someone else did it i finally have a basis to yap about it!!! it’s a really cool story and the concept is absolute peak; but based off feedback from people i know, the hardest thing to understand is the timestream? so based off of my own inferences, ive made an ‘explanation’? ive also made a summary of what might happen..???? i really like this story, so i’ve been trying to recommend it to as many people as possible; please correct me if i made any wrong points / should add spoilersso basically between every time period(epoch) there is an infinite space, and there are many forms of these spaces, but first one hoku encounters is a barrier; an interconnected space of past+pres, the [tampering of the future (which is also the past which altered)] can cause a place[the original past/future(inferred)] to lack a “future”, so the present can only repeat again and again, and what is left of the neglected past will only turn into time’s “cavity”, -causing the present to become the past(inferred), falling down the cavity to earlier and earlier epochs until they return to the beginning, and thus, causing the end of the world [due to a lack of a remaining past or future(inferred)]as for the timestream/sequels, they are a sequel to that ending of the world, which was the future that wasn’t able to continue due to it’s end, and since another future is unable to take sequence, it is turned into a time loop(refer to the first paragraph; the story is hard to explain due to it’s paradoxical nature). for this case, the story revolves around a man with a peculiar name, hoku, and has no memories of his past. he finds a note addressed to him, which leads him to this distorted timeframe, the sequel. from there, he finds friends, goes against ‘The Abundant creator’, gains the title of ‘Navigator of the timestream’, and more, forcing him to face the past he has avoided for years. (based off the official summary of this webn)i really hope more people can read it; it’s incredibly fun to read and very enjoyable !! also late happy 104K views ?
Realistic MC, Fantastic world building, and top notch power system.Really one of the hidden hems in here. Also there is not a single poison in the entire novel. The Mc is also a smart guy.