The start of the story and the sorority house arc hooked me up...Imma read it and see how it goes further. Loved that neighbour aunty as well..sensing some steamy scenes with her ahead...Keep it up!!!!
The story is intriguing. It's well-written and the plot is unique. The flow is smooth. There's mystery and it makes the reader want to learn more and read further. The characters are fully fleshed and their personality shines through the author's words. Actions and details are well descripted.Good work author! I will continue reading...
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Interesting journey in a new and mysterious sci-fi universe with our mc. We are at the start and I don't want to spoil so what I can say is that I love the setting and the world building, a lot of interesting premise for plot development. Added to my reading list
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A five star review cause It is really fun. I want the mc is evolve further and get a humanoid form but it should have eyes and teeth like Orochimaru (snake).
Hello!!! I know I said just minutes ago that I would wait to post a review, however I don't feel like sleeping tonight! Anyhow, to keep this great story from being spoiled, I'll try to only dance around some stuff. To be honest, one of the gramatically best novels I have read. I look at some of the AI translated ones and it's like comparing Heaven with Earth (hahaha... ha). Then, the story development. You are doing a great job pacing the story with the system in question. It's hard to not go from weak to a godly figure with wishes, so I can understand some of what you've done with the character. The character design is a bit iffy, to say the least. He can wish for so many other things that would make him powerful, but he chooses things that I do not agree with. But once again, I know you're compensating. Besides that, the characters have very unique personalities that I can actually relate to, which makes reading this a lot more enjoyable.The updating stability is... Uh......... Just make sure to keep up with the story. The world background is pretty basic. I like the exclusion of manuals; that concept always drives me nuts. The reason I'm rating this 5 stars is because it can further develop. I'm intrigued by the empires being included in the Murim and the dynamics between classes and cultivators.I have really enjoyed this so far and hope you can keep it up... Also, you know what I'm hoping for later. I'll be waiting...
There are constant time skips. The system only exists when the author remembers this is a system novel. The author conjoined two premises, he is trying to write an actual, serious cultication story but decided to give the protagonist cheats. It clashes. Why do the cheats even exist? Now for my personal input, I don't like it after he joins the sect/family. It's pointless. Could have been a cool rogue, solo cultivator story. Now it's turning into a cookie cutter cultivation story. I would have given it a 2 but I will give it a 3 because I can see how others might like it.
It has been a while since I last found a good Three kingdom novel like this it is good
The author posted the Part-I side story at starting of Part-II. But thank god novel available complete. Thanks for updating.I like reading novel on webnovel, because it's UI is unbeatable.
"Assistant take him to the Purify room."
they both reached in a park. Aon wants to talk with her alone.