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I am not big fan of smut only... I hope their is more to their storyEdit 1_ I was wrong to judge after reading initial chapter: It has story;action;romance;satisfaction.....Smut is too much initially but latter its lovely story and disconnected chapter does make sense latter.. So don't loose hope after initial reading... I assure umwill enjoy.
Spoil me pls~Did "He" got mentioned? Is "He" awake? Or in the process of awakening?
I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
Average isekai cultivation novel, not worth of your time unless you wanna waste it. It doesn't bring any novelty nor has amazing story telling, at best average.
i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating
Writing the review after I finished chapter 14. The mature part is done very tasteful and the story is also well done so far. It may be a modern setting but thanks to the whole new world in the game it also has fantasy and a system element.Keep up the good work author and keep posting!EDIT: I just reached chapter 35 and I have to say how refreshing it is, when the main character has no plot armor. She can die in the most vile way possible and the story can still continue. I cried like a turtle when Bugak found her.EDIT 2: Posting the review again as I just reached chapter 60. This is a fking masterpiece. I love it so much I have a note in my phone with my favorite chapters, so I can return to them when I’m in the mood :)
Great, regular update will make it better
An interesting plot furthered by good writing. Although system fantasy stories have become an increasingly common staple, hopefully the author will be able to distance this story from others.
I'm lazy, but his novel is very good,. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I honestly like the story. Everything is good about it. Nothing revolutionary or game-changing but it is interesting. MC and System interactions are smth new and cool. The story is pretty much crack and has nice humour. There are not enough chapters tho. If you want a light read where you won't have to overwork your brain cells definitely recommended. I personally LOVE storeowner stories, most of them are stupid, this one tho is quite cute and fun. Keep up the good work author! <3
I like the story a bit although there are inconsistencies in the story the characters aren't bad but they could use some the only real big issue that I have with the story are the repeating of chapter later onthat's the only big issue I have come across. Minor issue being that it doesn't feel like the MC is really having developed as a character in the story.Still I would come back to read this story at a later date and hope these issues get fixed.