is there no romance? will your mc never love anyone and just use his girls? and not even call them girlfriend or even wife and give them status as concubine ?
Forgot to write a review last night but Im writing a review rn
good writing, interesting start, characters lacking a bit of depth as of now.
One of those few stories that are really fun to read. Often times I just hate the protagonists in the stories. They are face-slapping overbearing and just as arrogant as the young masters. Often times their behavior when taken from the perspective of a third party is no different from the young master villains. In this particular story we have the young master villain who is able to get ahead of the 'protagonist' world main character, and is able to rouse the 'MC' into acting like the novel villain. The young master villain MC of this story steels the heroines, like other villain novels, yet he uses a more benign approach. He uses his advantages appropriately and avoids the pitfalls that the usual novel villains fall in with the world protagonist, which is usually the use of force or family connections to suppress the hero. I especially like the event where he goes and finds the hero's special encounter to get a lost medical technique and then memorizes it and takes a few key pages while leaving an incomplete version for the hero to find. The hero still finds the technique but does not realize that it is missing a few key pieces of information that would allow him to practice it safely. This ends up causing the hero long term problems and even impacts others of the world heros.
Love this epilogue
Riveted in the heart of a volcano. Sewn of denim fabric made from the blue sky itself. Rugged to the point of indestructibility, yet professional enough to be appropriate for business casual, come with us and, together, we will explore the Legend of the Mythological Jeans.
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I think it’s a great story I am disappointed it went the harem route but apart from that I like everything else. I suggest posting this story on other platforms to gain popularity, as the way it is currently set up even if people like the story they can’t justify paying for chapters as they would need to unlock close to a 1000 chapters, so it would increase your fan base if this story was in more platforms being read by more people whilst being more easily accessible without the pay wall
I really love this story it is an amazing story and I really enjoy reading the story. The plot is so good and the characters are very well written.
All the characters are extremely bland, except perhaps the MC's mercenary group having at least 2D characteristics. All the female players are insufferable and friendly with eachother. The MC is everyone else's *****, he does everything for them under the guise of him being a "good person".
The only time he got pissed off was because some retarded woman from his guild almost lost him tens of thousands of dollars worth of top-grade equipment that belonged to a friend of his, but he immediately cucked out and forgave her. The MC gets embarrassed by some priest that heals him at random times and everyone calls that "teasing", I call that retarded.
A bunch of women from his guild attack him out of nowhere sometimes yet he doesn't retaliate because the MC is a "good person".
There's a point where he goes to another city and there's a woman married to the leader of a powerful guild, she f**ks with anyone who disrespects her and has her guildmates kill them and anyone from the same guild on sight then making them lose levels repeatedly, but then when he sees her again, he forgives her because "anyone would've done the same". Are you retarded ? Only the most psychotic would f**k this hard with people, he even tries to compare it to someone else helping him in a tavern by killing 5 guys whom he had just killed the friend of (because of a bounty collection mission). They were about to kill you ! It's not the same !
For some reason the MC hides that he's the guy who killed a dude he hated because it'd attract people challenging him, which I doubt, but he keeps doing it months later when everyone else lost interest.
The game rules are unreliable at best.
I can't describe how much I hate this novel. I hate every interaction between characters, there are some realistic ones here and there, but overall they suck and it gets worse the longer you read.
Review was written by Parpaing from NU.
Aunque al principio era muy tedioso al leer pero desde el cuarto capitulo fue mejorando está que lo leí en un día los 58 capitulo y me quede con deseos de mas
I loved the story so much!! But I'm really sad that it's a short novel. I liked the character descriptions and background. Keep you the good work. I hope you publish a new novel of yours soon!