I love how the system is made, it's clear and not confusing. Ash's journey is exciting, and I'm looking forward to where it takes him. The story is beautifully written, and every word is easy to understand. Good job, author.
update more and make r18 chapters more in quantity and quality
i'm only in chapter 60 but its so good that i'm saving up coins and fast passes to be able to keep reading
I like the book so far(read up to ch 11), especially it's pacing, writing quality and how the story develops. I think the main character, Silivan I somewhat interesting, he is well designed and so us the system. The leveling up and cultivation vibes it gives is a fresh take on things. only problem for me here, is the descriptions that can sometimes seem confusing. other than that, incredible work.
Boom a new and amazing story really i loved it... it rally have a very cool story....waiting for the next chapter
Each chapter feels like a rollercoaster ride! You’ve done an amazing job of keeping the readers engaged with all the twists.I love the mix of action and emotion in this story. It's not just about the plot but the heart of the characters.
Please read this book and tell me if you love it
Author I hope you read this.My true rating is 4.4 but I saw your pitiful overall rating so i decided to improve it a little. It is a good dungeon novel but not enough to be on the top. I think your fighting scene is too long and sometimes you took atleast 10 chapters for just a mini boss fight to conclude. One more thing, I don't particularly like your dungeon set up, it's chaotic and there is no order and logical reasoning on it, Like glaze to forest to interior of the caste? to interior of the castle? to an Ice cavern? last one, your dungeon is already in the cold environment and then the theme of your dungeon is still cold. And I know that Niflheim is on the title but dude, make it warmer. Imagine, you can find a warm place in the coldest place/continent which is the dungeon. It will lure more adventurer for its uniquenes, relative to the environment. If you know Danmachi you can get my point.Remember, a dungeon novel is a sandbox novel, so make a world.Good Luck. I'am writing and giving reviews so I can improve my english. So pls rate my english.
This is really a good novel. I like everything: good story plot, characters and their potential development. I am looking forward for more updates. Also, I will definitely recommend to everyone to read this novel.
This book is sooo intriguing it deserves a Five Star Review⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. Got hooked in the first few chapters and can't do a day without it. Keep up the good work author!!!!
I really liked the world building and how the story starts, a good book.
AN AMAZING BOOK, REALLY KEEPS ME HOOKED IN WITH EVERY CHAPTER THERE IS LIKE, WHY DOES IT UPDATE SO SLOW AND THE GOOD CHAPS ARE BEHIND A PAYWALL UGHHH