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There is only 8 chapters so far. But you get quite some action from Asura, the ruthless unbound protagonist. There is a lot of face-slapping and looming schemes. There are mages AND martial artists in this world? Is this an Eastern-Western fusion? I am definitely excited for the world to gradually unveil. The formatting is not perfect. But hey, it doesn't affect the read that much. Solid story. Keep up the good work!
Shameless self-review. (Let's be honest, almost all authors do it.) I started posting this story as a way to practice my writing and gain more confidence. I never thought it would place second in a WPC. I actually think the plot and story are pretty decent, my only problem would be the grammatical errors (English is not my native language.), but I will try to correct them if you let me know. I accept any criticism, comment or suggestion that can help me to improve as an author.So don't hesitate to tell me your opinions, even if they are a bit harsh.Thanks for reading, I hope I can continue writing this story until the end.
It's really good... Nice start and I hope you continue maintaining it being good... I am waiting for more chapters... A very intriguing story indeed...
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It's great ! Looking forward for more..
I’m loving it. However I do agree with many other reviews, the system holds his hand a little to much. I understood at the beginning however he got his own land to build a factory like 100-200 chapters ago and still has yet to do it, just relies on the system. We have yet to see the “Genius Weapon Designer”. Im still enjoying it very much though and hope it doesn’t get dropped. Anyways you release chapter pretty much everyday so keep up the hard work. Needs some work but overall is a great story.
A boring novel with next to nothing going on for it. The death reincarnation system is a bit novel but that doesn't matter since everything about this novel from the protagonist, characters, story, world background, objectives to even the overall vibe just comes off as dull and lifeless. Even when reading a bad novel, I'm a little invested in whatever the protagonist is upto but here we can see early on that his lack of personality is incredibly stunning. You thought generic isekai protagonists or CN protagonists were generic? Think again.This MC is probably the most soulless MC I've come across period. I didn't know protagonists could have less personality than cardboard, I'm astonished. He goes through (added up) decades of a tragic life but comes out of it unaffected, basically the same unbearably uninteresting fellow he's always been. The man has the personality of stale water.I'm singling out the protagonist here but this could honestly be applied to everything, the death simulator aside, this is banal at best and offensively boring at worst. 0.5/5
The story flows from chapter to chapter which is refreshing. Enough details are given, so the settings are clear and easy to imagine. The characters are okay, and the MC is endearingly silly and entertaining. The descriptions and instructions of cultivation are also easy to grasp, which I appreciate since cultivation stories are a bit intimidating. Overall, I'm curious to how the MC will develop in the future. Nice!
shinning!!!! Yes biii you got this you rock!!!
first of all the synopsis is very misleading. tags too are not right. you say easy mode as if the mc is spending his time leisurely bur no. he is not at all op. i have read 31-40 chapters and mc is already struggling. it is not my cup of tea , but atleast follow your synopsis.