Strocker lunged clearing distance easily in the blink of an eye.
When Eve and Ares traveled outside the village gate, they saw a vast forest. After traveling for some miles they saw a yellow road with powerful aura and keeping the beast away.
Well written story. Author please update.
Its interesting, for some moba player will think this novel refreshing, and for non moba player they will know why moba is very interesting. Just try 5 chp or more before judge it
this novel is good to read in passing off tine
I never seen any novel that as detail as this even though some of the story is inspired by other but still not to concentrated on that part. anyway i just wanted to say i love this book and keep ip the work.
The situation the MC was in at the beginning was really painted for me, and I was able to picture it happen as I read it. His interaction with the mysterious events, consistently seeking for answers, that don't get answered right away helps push the MC in the right direction. I really enjoyed the relationship between the orb and the MC, and hope this back and forth continues throughout the book. It is also nice to see a cultivation novel set in a science fiction story line, as it doesn't always work, but the author was able to make it work, and work well. Added to my library, can't wait to read more.
The story line is well thought out. The pace is good with no major leaps or large times wasted in single thing. Character development is going nicely, and no major contradictions with events or peoples action.However, some of the writing of “That spell”, “Use that”, and such is annoying. Its fine once or twice but everytime is too much. Specially since the next sentence it is named said soell. I know the author is trying for suspense, but here it is better to just use the name or such. For example, instand of saying “use that”, it would go better to say “use water guard” or “ use your new spell.”
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It had so much potential and it died so fast now author i hate you for causing me pain of nerver ending hunger for new chapters...140 characters