The story is the usual cliche op beast through system story.. The translation is really well done (which is a pretty big suprise considering where we are) but it is corrected from mtl which means the usual, occasional, he/ she mistakesThe story is really unrealistic. They claimed that the world changed 5 years ago and you need 100 soul strength? to become a beast master. So the whole world (only china as usual due to your china superior fetish thingy) changed. They changed the whole school system, university qualifications, researched how to become a beast tamer + conditions, the world view by claiming that the beast tamer is the best job in just 5 years. Bro brexxit almost took longer and that was only one country and they want to change the whole world in just 5 years. The usual 3rd person narrative is also there (it means that a 3rd person, the spectator, always needs to comment on the deeds of the mc which means there will be a lot of faceslapping and pretending to be cool.)Character Design? the usual lazy writing which means none. World Background is too cliche, "gates opened" (black hole in the sky in this case), world changed, new occupation. I can already guess that there will be different worlds with a new level cap, after the mc gets op enough, just to
Outstanding Story line , I like these types of stories, please keep up posting next chaptera ??******************'***'****** ****************************
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While the story felt like yet another average cultivation-mmo story at the beginning, it very quickly took a life of its own and shown how deep the author had planned the world and the plot.It is very interesting to follow the protagonist as he learns about the many aspects of both cultivation and Alchemy, and there are many currents and mysteries moving in the background.With the high release rate as a bonus, this has easily become one of my favorite web-novels.
This should also have a powerful cultivation technique. Other than that the mc should also have some other buff in cultivation and other related stuff. The hero should also have some be there strong in combat Techniques. And also please don't fully over exaggerated this novel that much. This novel should also multiple world like lower world, medium world and large world. immortal realms should also be mentioned. Their should also be powerful element's such space, time and choas
I can't wait for this book to be complete. Is it me, or this novel seems to be related to Flowers Bloom from the Battlefield? The main character's name is Nan Hua and the title is called Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower. Hmmm
yo I just saw that you finally posted this story, can't wait to see more for this. Hope that the quality of the story is the same as the other one.
This is a great book, just wish the updates would not be erratic. However, it is very well written.
Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please keep uploading more chapters.Btw, do you have any socials? I'll add you on insta/discord.
One of the best original entertainment based novel. Not overly dramatic which I see in most of these entertainment novels. Its got solid and believable characters. Of course it has some cliche's like possible main heroin literally falling for him. But it also destroys one common cliche which is the typical Ex hating him and instead they have this common understanding.Update schedule is great with content not at all taking a hit. The world-building is simple to understandHighly recommended to anyone and everyone. Really enjoy reading, keep it up
Pirates and Yuri best combinations. Cant wait till this gets super popular. Personally i like the way that Hestia acts with the people around her. I hope this novel gets a lot of views!!!!