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kingdom buildings always start off great but there's only so much you can do and invent without it feeling repetitive. not here yet, though. through his limited, but sizeable, upgrade points, mc has a limited window where he can change his empire massively with his system cheats and i like that he's going out the gates swinging. no rationing or hiding his powers but flaunting them from the beginning because appearances matter! there's an interesting dynamics between the mc and his subjects where there's some closeness in their interactions but also distance that one would expect between a ruler and his subjects.also, you can see the difference in background and status in how the characters talk to each other. those with noble titles tend to have their dialogues written out, while knights and dwarfs for example tend to shorten and combine their words how we usually do nowadays, yknow like don't, comin' etc. and it just gives a nice differenciation between the social statuses of the characters that a lot of authors tend to neglect a little.as for the grammar side of the novel, i'd say 99% great, with some words strangely written but those are few and far between.all in all, a story with promise that will keep you entertained. not on shadow slave or the one about a certain lord fool, but much better than most of the current WN line up. keep it up!
First of all, reading the synopsis rose the zeal in me to read the main story.I really enjoyed my read, the story has so much potentials.Plus I love the theme?
Ngl, I was expecting myself to feel bored, reading this but instead it made me interested in the story
Its really good i just read it to give it a go its definately great
This is such a good and fun read. Probably one of the few novels which I don't get bored reading. The story is unique in its own way and has a lot of potential. Moreover, the writing is just amazing and so detailed. Keep it up, author.
I waved my arms at him. "Bye Jieee."
"So wait, your telling me that you were beyond intelligent and yet you chose to hide it?" Yggdrasill interrupted the story midway because he didn't really understandnthe logic behind it. "Why didn't you just use your knowledge to think of a way out of the situation?"
There are many women who chase after him and if they're lucky; they will get many benefits as his partner. He didn't have a problem with that because basically, their relationship purely based on the sexual need for both parties. After that, he will give them diamonds or money to cut the line, just like a transaction.
Drama was continuing without any interruption from the crowd. Whenever, Lissana played her part crowd will get energize her by giving huge round of applause resulting in a small shake through the Plaza .
"Who are you and why did you try to board our ship? Zoro asked as the man squirmed on the ground
"THERE IS? SHOW US TO HIM, O GREAT ONE!"
