Well first off the explaination of the world background needs to be addressed, and i’d like it if you gave more detail into how characters, backgrounds and objects looked but other than that the writing is pretty great and you update quite consistently ffrom what I can see. So just keep going
Honestly in the first 20 chapters if you removed all the talk about how useless the knight class is there would only be about 5 chapters worth of content. it's the default class that seemingly a large amount of people have to take due to lack of options but this story falls into the pitfall of everyone having an opinion on the MC and we have to hear from each one friend, rival, teacher, parents, principle, random classmates, etc.
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A rare gem. While I personally will not be spending coins on this I feel that it is very well done. This novel is well written and translated with an original concept.I recommend giving this story a shot. By the time you get through the free chapters you should be able to decide for yourself if you like it.An easily recommended story. Give it a go, you might enjoy it.
Good book, very interesting and exciting plot. The author must have really put some effort into this book, and I hope he updates soon though, hehe. Anyways, it's a nice read.
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I am genuinely enjoying this, I hope this will continue to be as good as it is till the end. because I will be sure to read on. Keep up the good work author! ?
So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing!
I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter .
It's definitely worth reading.
This novel is one of the best VRMMORPG novels out there and one of my favourites.The main character Yuan is dense and pure because of his condition and minimum interaction with society. But I guess thats reasonable over an edgy and cringe MC. But Character Development is quite slow compared to the story's overall pacing and I hope it develops.Characters are well designed for each situation and helps keep the story going at a decent flow. (with the occasional face slapping ofc XD)The Background of both the game and real world is well designed, but infomation on the Nine Heavens isn't fully revealed even from where Im at (Im at Chapter 444) and I hope it keeps growing without affecting the overall flow of the story. The Writing is very good with little to no grammatical and spelling errors helping with the consistent immersion. But during some instances the scenery was briefly described which didn't help me fully picture the place in which the situation was going on.The novel is very awesome overall and I would recommend anyone interested in reading Eastern Fantasyor Video Games to give this a try!I would also like to give respect to the author for writing such a novel! Keep up the good work Author!P.S. This is my first ever review if you see any mistakes please point them out and thank you for your time reading up to this point!
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