A good novel, I like it and probably will become one of my favorite books(maybe, who knows?) I dislike the introduction of more women that has signs of intimate relationship with Keiran(maybe just me? not sure if they really do) because I'm getting quite confused of who am I gonna ship to the mc(I like the doctor best for him). because I liked harem a lot in the past(I still like harem) I tend to ship many women to the mc and probably Keiran is gonna end up with just one woman(well, as long as there is romance probably the book is gonna be perfect for me, just for me okay?)Good work author!
nice
It's alright if you don't mind reading contradictions. The title is bs, he's all abou 't forming a team even before it begins, and he cuts himself as a form of pain resistence training since forever...He also apparently had dreams about the apocalypse and didn't do Jack to prepare other than cutting himself.Flashbacks are poorly indicated if at all.Its an alright read if you don't mind feeling you read a poorly translated wuxia novel with great grammar and western names.That said, that's only up until it gets monitized and if there really isn't anything else to read. Its like listening to a little kid spewing off his fantasies about how this and that character he imagines is better because if yours does this, his will have a special item or prep to do that, and then when you bring the slightest Incling of logic into play, not even pragmatism but simply, I thought you said he is this and that, then obviously he's that too but the new and better thing more so.Get it? There's no lasting definition in anything. First chapter paints him as some sort of bullied unfortunate self destructive lonely emo kid that can see the future, and the next he's calling his friends, mostly girls to get away from the windows cuz the sun is bad and takes of his mystical glasses of a clear stone that blocks his future sight abilities that he found as a kid cuz else he be like cyclops with his lazer beams so he needs tha mystical glasses to block his future sight...Ya get it? No? Exactly. That's what the story is like.
Noice!!!So far ''PLOT" is really good I joined hope you maintain the quality as novel progress......,..,.......................................................
No misspellings and no grammar issues. Some things could be reworded better but other than that book is good and eye catching. Makes you want to read more to see what is about to happen.
good story,I read it MTL.But after ch 630 he forget about his wife and family.As the story progresses there is not even mention of his family , even he comes to home,he just wants to seclusion than again new adventure .
This is my honest thoughts, I think your writing is superb but it needs to be proofread for grammar mistakes. Your storyline is engaging and full of action which keeps the reader glued to their seat. The descriptions are amazing!
I don't know what exactly I don't like but I just don't want to read this book.
Quality. Lots of promise, invested in the story and the characters. Looking forward to see where it goes. MC has a good personality, definitely a scoundrel. Good casual read!
really interesting Story and world with Reincarnation but Not a human from earth but a kid from a world with Magic that dragicially died
Not gonna lie im kinda surprised about how few reviews this novel has and i think you should read it if you like game/mmo novels HOWEVERyou should be warned, its one of those mmorpg novels where the game is something more than just a game eg something from the game can be used outside etc. most close comparisons would probably be novels like "guild wars" and "shuras wrath"if you care about game balance you are gonna have a field day. all titles and unique things are hilariously broken. anywayi cant complain about writing or updates, mostly typos updates are pretty consistent so +1 from herethe story, there is some things which i dont really like, however they are personal preferences so i cant really hammer the author for that (mostly cultivators and swords) the development is pretty fluid and my biggest gripe is the huge amount of time spent in the desolate world/realm? and the short time between powerups, you dont really get a feel for how strong he really is. personally i wouldnt mind a slower burn with more detailed actions and descriptions. but still good +1 hereCharacters are excellent, i expected nothing and got a pretty good return. the cast we have some background on is really quite likeable, has flaws and strong points, sure it aint no shakespeare but is really quite good for a free webnovel. funnily enough i find the cast compelling enough for me to overlook my bias against swords and cultivators. the author has a good kind of eccentric way of writing, you can call it a bit edgy, but i find it quite compelling speeches specifically. combined with some pretty wholesome intimate parts. all in all i really like the characters +1the world is probably the least developed both in and out of vr it does the job alright, but has minimal descriptions it is only 60 chapters so far, so take it with a grain of salt, packing character development and world building into 60 chapters is gonna be a challenge for even the best of writers suggestions/preferences as stated before i wouldnt mind the novel to burn a bit slower, things happen pretty fast i enjoy the details and descriptions of the world around him alot. a bit more world building and you are golden. i would say more chapters but on this point us readers will probably never be satisfied.best of luck with your novel-88