If u want a realistic novel. this isn't for you.
the story was very immersive. The World Building is superb, Power System, Plot and Characters was good.
Kingdom Build was okay, the MC was too reliant on the system, but it wasnt to the point he was useless without it... (Well, maybe a bit?)
ANYWAY, THE ONLY COMPLAIN I HAD IS... THE MC.
At first he was cautious, smart, rational, and cold which is I like, but as the time goes, he become soft, naive and goody goody.
He become self center idiot doing things that will cuz him trouble. sigh.
Overall, it was good. it has a lot of potential. i just dont likethe development. Its like watching an action, horror, mystery, fantasy movie turns fairy tale.
anyway, its just my opinion.
FUCK I caught up
I read that he didn't up with anyone but Princess 7. True or False?
Hey this is my review, I recommend you turn off your brain to read this. I mean don't get me wrong this has a cool concept it's just executed wrong. I lost so many brain cells reading the character interactions and I don't think the romance was any good I mean everyone's opinon is different so I'm not gonna say that it's bad it's just that maybe lower your hopes going into this because this is definitely not 5 star material.
how about you read trial marriage
Hi I am in the 936 chapter and I don’t have any motivation to keep reading I dropped this novel thinking that if I rested some time I would recupérate de energies to finish it and in the meantime I started and finish LOTM and now after enjoying such masterpiece this novel just seems not worth it I have really good memory and remember like 80% of everything that happen till now , so I don’t need a reread Pls tell me how to keep reading I don’t like to leave things half done
I read it around three nad half years ago.This novel till this day is one of my favorites novel tbh.I found it strange that the main fl is a child but I loved her character progresion.I love how the ml is protecting evryone and how he knows he's week.I read it in I think 6 day,I had a 100-150~ chapters read per day :)))
very novel please update it a little faster. I hope the story can be slowed down a little. please make him do business also. for example, he could buy under armor
hey guys it's a review from the author here although this my second book, l hope that whoever comes across the novel will love it and you enjoy the story and follow Zack's path.
so l you welcome to a world of abilitans and an golden era of science and technology[img=Feeling it]
I Honestly really like this novel, give it a try as you might also!
Now this is definitely a hidden gem. I don't know why this is not popular right now. If you are a mystery fan, at least give it a try. You definitely won't regret it. Although few chaps are released till yet, but it has already managed to hook me in. I am eagerly waiting for more chapters.
Guys ,This novel Is really amazing... Story Development and world Building are just awesome, character Design is exelent. The first few chapters are a little bit Mid, but if you could just read 10 or so chapters you would Love the story. The comedy in Late chapters are great too. You can just feel author's improvement in writing and creativity as the story progress... Thank you author for your phenomenal Novel and pls keep up the good work.❤️