~30~ Chapters review. Why should you start reading this book? Because it's great of course! More seriously, I've read the other books of our dear author, so here is what I can tell you: - Author knows what he is doing, it's not his first shot. - Author knows how to write a novel in a more than DECENT ENGLISH and his writing is FLUID, things that unfortunately very few webnovels can boast about, especially in early chapters - Over the last few years, author has proven that he was capable of publishing multiple chapters daily. He won't disappear or go on a 6-months hiatus. - 1chap/day will probably increase in the near future after the author finishes one of his other books.If you like eastern fantasy, give a try to his other books, they are great, not flawless but they will entertain you! Now, what about THIS novel?I had some reservations about the 'system' tag because I find that systems in novels more often than not remove agency from the mc, make his growth unnatural and authors don't know how to balance that later in the story.So I'm relieved that this is a 'light system' so far, it is not some godlike entity granting op bonus only to our mc.Mixing evolution, system, apocalypse, and cultivation is a breath of fresh air!I hope author will find the right balance throughout the novel. It reminds me of 'The Oracle Paths' a little bit, but the two novels are still very different. Characters are compelling, no major flaw there so far. I don't think there will be any harem.I hope author will introduce more side characters not existing only through our mc, the very best novels also shine thanks to their original side characters, I know that it's sometimes hard to balance as the story still has to focus on one mc.I wish that our mc will continue to grow differently compared to the mcs from the author's other books, we readers like variations in our characters' personality.Overall this has been a very enjoyable 30 chapters read, I recommend everyone to give it a try, you won't regret it! This novel has the potential for top 10, I'm certain of it. PS: I hope Dyon can work faster, Dimensional Descent also needs 3 chapters a day!
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In lOve, is what i am with this story.??The story is soo good ? It is literally the dream school of every student is this worldI really wish Principal Fang was my school’s principal??
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It was am amazing novel. Thanks for the good laugh. I admire the author’s effort on describing things generously. The find it somehow relaxing.
I don't generally write reviews, but for this book, I thought I should.I have read many, many novels. I started out with MGA (couple of years ago) and have read WMW, LOTM, RI, DE, ATG, Soul Land, Coiling Dragon, Martial World, Supreme Magus and many more till date.So believe me when I say this-This is a HIDDEN GEM through and through.The BEST part of this novel is that there is almost nothing that one can label as cliché. The best parts of an Eastern Novel can be seen here.Do try it if you like xuanhuan/xianxia. You won't be disappointed.
So far Story is good. I like the concept. Keep it up..................................................................................................pls, add tags for the novel.
Since we're about 28 chapters in so far, I think I should clarify up some things. This story is going to be one of those stories where you will either love or hate it.Reasons why you might like it:- Mc (Ronald) is heavily misunderstood- Heroines are completely devoted to the mc- Heroines prioritizes the mc's well-being (which is where the misunderstanding comes in)- Mc is OP (although it will rarely be showed throughout the story)Reasons why you might hate it:- Mc is oblivious to everything- Mc mentally suffers- Mc doesn't have his own free will (because of the system) during the plot he reenacts.Obviously, the reasons that might make you hate this book stated above will be learnt by Ronald SLOWLY overtime, however it has been undecided when he'll completely realize this as the time of making this review, so if you plan on reading this book, don't come in expecting his problems to be solved for awhile.With that being said, read at your own caution and enjoy!
this MC i don't know how to describe him but calling him a simp would probably be an insult to simps, his entire clan looks down on him but instead asks how he can help the clan, then he is given the job of cleaning the weapon while others cultivate..
Story starts out pretty fast with our disgusting protagonist Otaku loser turning into his cultivation self. (Side note, if he has lived for thousands of years, not sure why he isn't more mature but that's whatever.) As of the latest chapters where it was revealed that he was actually in a world made by a cultivator and that (surprise surprise) the world is real and not just a game, I have kind of started to lose interest. It starts exciting with a lot of unknowns as we observe our protagonist and the world chat etc. But, we see less and less of the world chat functions, and the story feels less like what it originally was.I know that he is supposed to be 'mysterious' but part of what made this story so good was the merging of cultivation, video games, and chats. Also, the leaderboards haven't really been used well. There were many opportunities to open up more routes for characters or sects but they are brushed aside and the only reoccurring characters are the MC's waifus. Oh, and yes im angry that grandmaster turned suicidal. By the way, please please please make leaderboard characters more relevant. The only relevant one you are making is the "number 2" but since they were all sent in batches, I'm sure that the competitive spirit is fueling the top 10 players.. add some worth to them and give them a name. As for my last critique: The fact that the players were all sent in batches is kind of strange and lame. Due to the capabilities of the cultivation God or whatever I'm sure there could have been a waiting room or a time manipulation on a high level for everyone to start at the same time. idk, guess it's just so that mc seems '"cooler" that he did all this while being behind.
In my opinion it has solid world and character development shown throughout the whole 388 chapters, I have read this far. Even "Nobody"-Backgroundcharakters sometimes get their moments and their background is explained which at first seemed overdoing it but after so many chapters I get to enjoy every last bit of world background, charakter development and every background story, no matter if about our beloved mc, the world, some sidecharakter or one of the friends of the protagonist. There are some mistaked and evey now and then the measurements don't make that much of a sense, because in the beginning it was switching between them every now and then, but for the last few chapters I did not find anything like that so, even that got solved :)
I am currently on chapter 54 so far and I'm truly enjoying everything about this novel. The Charcters personalities and some things they do or say have made me laugh so hard. Also I love this new magic world, or should I say worlds of how there are Vampires, Werewolves, Beast races, Humans and their different relationships among each other whether it be allies or enemies is great I feel like the politics will continue getting better. Plus I love the way the author set up the system it's a new take on systems the Van Helsing system. Also I'm truly excited for the relationships of the MC it seems like the perfect novel for men of Culture. I will continue reading and supporting when I catch up I will leave another Review.