honestly steady brother cultivation stories are the best to me. it's cool , funny most of the time and the mc is super smart most of the time. but what I font like is when they teach their goal. then say the stronger I get the more I want to hid myself ill stop hiding at "inserts real" and it like a cycle but other than tht love it
Clearly the Author has some bias towards other harem members.. *Nuwa* cough.. while other members only get mentioned by name and not having any lines. Xiao Wen was my favorite from the start and now she barely gets mentioned and just fades in the backgroudAlso author kinda bummed out the plot of the Liena's fate organization of the earth realm. They are trying to open the fate kingdom as their goal when it just suddenly opened when MC kidnap a girl and Fate king was like "kill him for me". meh
All I could say after reading up to chapter 170 is that, MC is too biased towards females. The number of females he has killed compared to males is 1:100 or 1:1000.
cemoi thinks this is an okay novel cemoi ratings: story Development: 4 goodwriting quality: 4 average character design: 3 average updating stability: 4 goodworld background: 3 average total rating: 3.6 pretty okay novel not bad,not good just average.
Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? ? love it ?
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....
what can i say other than that after 195 chapters this has become my all time fav story of the last 5 years. For sure my fav on webnovel. Its just so good . it hits all the right spots for me. I love the world the intrigue the Characters are SOOO GOOD i love it . Boy does the mc and the current main girl have the best relationship chemestry ( if some happens to this pairing ima be upset for real). What else other than im here for more ur doing amazing . ❤
I will not lie, just added this to my library because of the coverWell done!im off now!
This novel is almost finished being translated. I guess we can finish translating the 100 or so chapters of this novel. People should go vote for this one so we can finish the novel.
Fun to read