It's a good start,keep moving forward and pay attention to any corrections given on the way.Wish you all the best,you have a potential.The story is a nice one
Hey everyone , ur friendly author here :)The mc personality will be kinda standard :/Nice and kind to friends and family , no marcy and dark to enemies , now this will not be an heram , and im not quite good with writing style but i will improve as time goes on :)Now from tommarow and so on i will relese 1/day chapters
I love this but those updates man, they make me lose hope. But seriously good though, totally reccomend when you like that kinky cock blocking stuff because this is literally it.
This story is a gem! The characters and plot line are well rounded. I love the fl, she's so over the top in everything without batting an eyelash.
This story is quite addictive. I love the characters and the plot.Great story author
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The story is interesting, although i would like to have longer chapters. This short chapters gives a feeling of discontinuity in the story. But the Novel has potential and i am curious how the author will continue it.
Thanks you all for reading the book. I really appreciate. This book always create this excitement within me whenever I sit to write. I just hope you find it exciting as well.
Finally a fire mage not some space, time, dream or dragon tired of this kind of novels.Great book really enjoying reading the story.Also will author introduce romance in the story ?Great work author !
This review has been automatically generated by the Godfather World System as a way to increase the ratings of this novel. Although not much could be said of the novel for now, it has been approved by the system as being an S-grade novel.
(Will alter if needed)This story idea seems a little stupid. I'm desperate so I'll try it but if I don't follow up it wasn't good.. . . . . .
This one sounds Ike I reincarnated as an energy with a system, but without the system or energy source limitations....................................