I'm really hooked up with this book. I'm enjoying it especially chapter 4 and 5. I don't know what to say again but I'm in love with you novel. Keep it up.
A thrilling beginningThe plot got me wanting more.I'm gonna stick with you author , don't relent I wish I could talk more about what I've seen so far but I'd keep commenting Accordingly....in each chapter that I find mind blowing
You have such a great story going. I'm enjoying the build ups and character development. Keep up the good work, but I do encourage you to go back and make some edits for the weird Grammar and "Where's your capitalization?" freaks.
the grammer is horrible author keeps mixing up he with your it was funny the first two times but I just kept happening. Scenes are dragged on honestly the only saving grace is the world buliding
finally a good trench novel i can't wait for more
I'd like the way you write the first chapter how everyone he live turned their backs on him because of his defective stats as a royal truly shows how a person holding power would do if they see someone who is not even worth noticing
Honestly I genuinely enjoy this trial novel out of all the recent trash copypaste, there is no system aspect to the progression and it fits the theme of an immortal magus, the main character appears to have the ability to plan for the future and consider the sutainability of his actions, as of chapter 35 the main character also does not appear to be a simp for every woman that he sees nor is he an emotionless machine, he has friends but avoids letting them get too close since he is aware of the fact that he does not age and it will only hurt him in the future watching them grow old while he remains unaffected by the passage of time.In addition I enjoy the magic system of the novel, there exists quantitative mental strength for a magic weilder to be able to percieve their surroundings and manipulate the world through their will via basic telekinesis, however in addition there exists spells of levels 0,1,2,3,etc which are much more powerful for their worth but are more limited in applications, i can see a future power dynamic involving a mixture of pure mental manipulations coupled with spellcasting as a form of magic which may be interesting. Thus far we have not seen the qualitative change in a magic user's power after a breakthough, however I am hoping that the path of power in the novel does not replicate warlock of the magus world and other novels in which the main character is forced to choose a permanent spell that cannot be changed later since I dislike such things out of personal preference, though if executed well then it can still be interesting.I hope to see the main character playing more defensively like Han Jue since it makes sense to prioritise self protection when you an immortal with infinite lifespan fight a mortal with finite lifespan thus your losses upon death are infinitely greater than your foe's. Since the mc is untalented I can absolutely see a future where he is incredibly cautious avoiding conflict whereever possible. Top tier thus far
Hey, I am fan of your writing and would like to talk to you, do let me know if we can connect on fb or email THe story development is outstanding
How can anyone rate this book full of horrodeous grammar 5 stars, seriously? Story is good though, but reading is pain in ass unless edited.
Personally I liked this novel, it is easy to read, when u want to relax and read about an MC with a powerful abIlity this is a good novel. The characters are a bit shallow in my opinion, but at the same time it lessens the pressure from reading. This Novel is all about ur personal mood at the moment
This is a beautiful book, I haven't read such creative use of words and an image created so proper for a long time. Surely the Author has mastered his writing technique. A great book to read.
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