I would highly recommend this novel. I have never seen a novel that has been this detailed about magic and the system is also pretty unique in its own way which makes this even more interesting. It is refreshing to see such a competent main character that actually have passion about his job and is actually a great person with a great personality. I would love to thank the author for how well his story is coming along.
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Goldman Sachs and Morgan Stanley aren't Investment Corporations...If you use real companies at least get it right.Not sure if author, or if translator westernized it and trolled
Keep up the good work, hope you can carry this novel till the end.Grammar a bit wishy-washy, here and there but everything thing else is great.
How many floors should a bag of rice stand, how many floors should a bag of rice stand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice!Spicy Tiansai! ! !
Not for me.Ugh I thought webnovel was past this.Bad novel......................................, .............................................
As a new reader to both pirate novels and Yuri novels, I was a bit... No...a lot skeptical about this but I quite enjoy it. Harem was never my cup of tea but tbh it sounds good for now. I might do another review after the novel gets like 50 chapters but unless I change my opinion (5 stars) idk if I will.
Definitely a newbie author, but the story is definitely unique and has good potential grammar could be better. Descriptions could be better. Fast paced. Mc is sort of heartless and does things for his own benefit.
I like everything about it. I haven't seen anything wrong with it personally. Its consistent, good grammar, decent personality (if not a little greedy), and its decently realistic especially since it's in a game. Genuinely a good read.
I only continued to read cause of the authors previous works, else I would have long left. The first 20 chapters are all world building and prologue until he gets the system, which in itself is a questionable choice. After reading that much you just feel tired out. There’s all these characters introduced that I simply can’t care about since I’m still waiting for the meat of the story to show up.It’s supposed to be a cultivation comedy but I haven’t laughed. Ball breaking is not funny in the slightest.???Then theres the characters who have downgraded intelligence just so the MC can look smarter but fine it’s a comedy so I’ll overlook it. None of them feel like they’re immortals, there’s nothing about dao, it’s all shallow power realms. it feels like a face slapping historical imperial palace drama, not an immortal world. Dialogue is sometimes cringe, which the author excels at.I would be fine with all of this if it was actually funny since it’s not the focus, but it doesn’t excel in comedy either. Maybe it’d get better later, but the start is not promising. I want to like it but I can’t.
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