Nice anthem really liked it.
the translation is too terrible to read
Read upto current (573 at this time) the first 300ish chapters are rather good, note this is basically always erotica, but it got dark and weirder with fetishes, including bestialty, homesexuality( they 'look' like a girl or in one case is a hermaphrodite aka futanari) and modern day western pedophilia, I say western as 13 is age of consent for the writers country.They also shifted focus from the cool girls to how weird and grotesque his penis is now, seriously, messed up descriptions that are unrealistic even within a fantasy setting.Erotica aside the adventures, battles and kingdom building is actually pretty good and witty in many places.PS I hope the horse dies a painful death.
not a lolicon but mai seems like good waifu material
Yes, it is under the yaoi tag
Thank you for translating this! I love reading it so much! Reincarnation, male lead to booty and all have a happy married life *-*PS: etvolare, are you French ?
If you don't mind a protag who alleys thinks his week and a cowered theen it's decent.
Einlion begins a new story once more. Past evidence shows that the probability of this story getting anywhere is unfortunately, abysmally small.
Now about this story. I’m honestly baffled. Einlions stories for the past few years have just been a bombardment of “18+ scenes”, while skipping any sort of meaningful relationship build up leading to said scenes with the love interests. This is probably the main reason most of his readers were tired of him writing harems. Why would you want to read something that practically lacks a story because it’s bogged down by lemons with characters that had zero build up leading to them.
What does this have to do with me being baffled? It’s because this story is apparently an attempt at writing something without a harem. Yet what does Einlion spend a large part of the story doing? He’s writing meaningful development between the mc and various female characters, giving these characters: interesting personalities, backgrounds, aspirations, oh and of course they all want to get with the MC. What does this mean? It means Einlion is finally writing what was missing in his latest stories, except since it’s not a harem there will never be any satisfying pay off. Am I saying the characters aren’t allowed to have depth if they won’t be love interests? Absolutely not, that would be amazing if only Einlion didn’t spend so much time describing how nearly every female character has a crush on the MC and how lucky they would be to get with him.
Would this have to have been a harem for there to be a satisfying pay off? Nope, but it’s disheartening to see the MC have amazing chemistry with characters like Ohta, that could lead to really fun to read storylines that take place throughout the story over time and literal reincarnations instead of what we’ve gotten before in previous stories. “Nice to meet you! wanna bang? Sure!”
Once again, I’m baffled. In Eins harem stories, he’d skip straight to the spicy scenes with no build up (Honestly I’m sick of lemons at this point). Now in his “non harem story”, he’s taking the time to build actual characters and their interactions with the MC, only to never do anything meaningful with them.
Plot wise sure, he’s to die soon and will go to another world so it makes sense for the MC to not want to start anything. So why even have a large part of the story dedicated to how much everyone wants to get with the MC. Should have just not mentioned any romance at all from the beginning and instead keep everything platonic.
Idk anymore, read it if you don’t mind reading a “no harem story” that has all the build up with multiple characters but know there will be nothing to come out of it in the end.
Moarr ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The premise is interesting , but the MC is way too stupid.
Love the writer ＜3 their stories never disappoints!
The fanfiction has a promising and interesting idea that has the potential to become a great story. Unfortunately, the reading experience is hindered by the poor writing style and bad grammar. There are many spelling and grammar errors that can cause difficulties for readers, and the plot is confusing due to unnecessarily complex sentences and unclear phrasing. We would recommend the author to take more time to express their ideas more clearly and precisely, and to conduct a thorough revision to improve the readability and enjoyment of the story. Despite the weaknesses of the writing style, the story is promising and has the potential to become a masterpiece if carefully revised.