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This novel is great so far but I feel sad for you now after web novel banned everyone from reading on PC which makes it even harder for people to find ur story. I will try to read this novel in my free time on myiPhone. Goodluck!!
Cultivation + Modern Setting, something rare, done more than just well. No comments regarding grammar, with an anti hero MC that actually has common sense. Worth the time spent reading.
Why the hell I won't give it five stars if it is the only one I like from the bunch? Be the way, I really hate how reviews look when people have to spam some random letters just to get to the right word count. Fix it already, qidian, This limitation clearly fails to bring good reviews and just annoys people.
This.... is a very "meh" story.Plot: The main character can't really decide on a clear, long term goal, even by chapter 30+. It doesn't need to be super realistic, any goal is a good one.Translation Quality: Readable, but the translator translates without much care to be honest. There was a joke referencing one of the character's names, and the translator didn't even bother explaining. It left the readers very confused, and looked poorly done.Character design: Meh. I mean, main character is like, "Let's slowly induce a change of character compared to old soul in this body!" Proceeds to do almost everything very different. "I'm going to treat my sister like a daughter!" Near constantly flirts with her (they aren't blood related though).Just.... an annoying read all around. The action scenes are very.... poor too, it's all a blur, and you can't even tell wtf is happening half the time. I can't tell if it's an author or translator issue. All I can say is, there are better stories out there, this one does not have my vote for next to be fully translated.
Nice story, please add more teasing in erotic ways with harem characters . Loved the novel very much and i hope the harem wont be so big without characters development
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Its a great story I personally would like to read a continuation of this series so please write a part 2
Got to give this 5 stars.The author is so much good at explaining football matches. It like you can see the game happening while you read.The story is about Kazuki got a system that allowed him to train! In sleep!The pace and progression of the story are absolutely great!
China Nationalism strikes again baby!!! Insulting other cultures is just an everyday thing for these Chinese authors. I don't know why a book filled with racism get to be translated tbh.
So far so good... Overall, a good read. MC knows who and what to prioritized.
Dear Author: The way you describe the situations and the feelings of the characters is amazing. You make the reader empathize with each character and feel their joys, sorrows, despair and every emotion that you portray in the book. Please don't give up, this story is too good to be left unfinished.
91 chapters 8-29-23
