the book is soooooooooo awesome eeee. I loveeeee it so muuuuch.
This is a great Novel with a good plot with an amazing world background. The only thing is that needs to be improved in this novel is the writing quality which I will give a few suggestions. There are many grammatical mistakes such as mixing the genders, mixing the past tense and present tense, mixing the point of view of the 1st person and 3rd person, and finally there are a few areas where the wording could be more clear and concise. If you are reading this review, please keep reading! These are mistakes that could be overlooked due to how great this novel has developed!
Liu shu is a cutie pie.First Yasenia now her...
The author came to my home and started beating me to make me rate the book?.
A great piece of work!!! I fell in love with the main character. There is a certain mysterious charm and elegance of a higher demon in her behavior. The otherworldliness of her mind is also stunningly pronounced. I've read a lot of books about demons, but I've never seen such a realistic description of the behavior of a demon... Bravo!!!
Author please check the grammar and proof read the story. The sentences are weird and don't make sense. The idea is great but the writing breaks immersion.
A good scenario, writing quality is successful, the presentation of the humanoid rulers is short and effective. it is quite understandable. thanks to the author, keep going on.
Probably shouldn't review my own work but Idgaf.gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
This story is very dark and evil. I think that It has some potential but as all really evil stories it is quite useless and future development is easy to predict. It is obvious that really evil characters are basically sociopaths, so such stories become dull really fast and can become only worse in future. There is too many really evil things in real world so I do not recommend such read for anyone.
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Pretty much a xianxia with a Mc that is considered trash and untalented but gets a fortuitous opportunity and becomes stronger than those more talented than him. As there are not too many chapters so I will refrain from making too many points but it has plenty of usual problems. For Example, The background is loosely explained with little to no interactions and the ones that do happen are bland or forced with the usual looking down on Mc. Characters are not fleshed out and author seems to be trying to focus on Mc alone with other characters only being there for convenience.
This book it is really interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter.Really Really Good Book.